H50 Fic: "The Mountains Washed Away" 2/?, H/C, Danno/Steve

[phreakycat]

Title: The Mountains Washed Away, Chapter 2
Author: Phreakycat
Pairing: Danno/Steve
Rating: M
Genre: Adventure, H/C, Slash
Warnings: Some violence, mention of physical injury, boy love (though I think of this as an enticement rather than a warning...)
Summary: Take Steven and Danno and blend well with gunfire and an explosion. Add a healthy dose of

Comments

[phreakycat]

I'm hurryin', I'm hurryin'! Welcome to the wonderful world of slash whore fandom! *hands you a welcome basket full of gay porn and man-pain*

[kitmerlot1213]

I must tell you that I'm enjoying the CRAP out of this story!

I think you've really got Danny and Steve's voices down, especially Danny's and I can't wait to see how you are going to get the guys out of this extremely perilous situation. How long before Chin and Kono realize that their bosses are missing? And will sharks be drawn to Steve's blood before they can reach that fiberglass in the water?

Keep up the great work :)

[phreakycat]

Thanks so much for the feedback! It's always a relief to hear the characters' voices feel authentic to readers, as that's an area I get very nervous about!

[serenity_pen]

I am all kinds of loving this. The snark and Danny dialogue are spot on. The pacing is well done. Very much looking forward to more!

[phreakycat]

Thanks so much! You made me feel all glow-y inside!

[samjohnsson]

Okay, another beautiful cliffhanger! Though, swimming with a concussion? No thanks!

[phreakycat]

Yeah, I can tell you from experience it's no fun. I dove off a wharf when I was 14 and landed head-first on a submerged chain. Even the twenty foot swim back to shore with a minor concussion SUCKED ASS. So I've felt Steve's pain. Literally. Any yet, I still willingly subject the poor man to it. I'm cruel.

[phreakycat]

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)