Fic: "Lit Up" 3/4, Suits, Harvey/Mike NC-17

[phreakycat]

Title: Lit Up Chapter: One Genre: H/C, slash Word Count: Roughly 12,000 at current count. Warnings: Language, overuse of color adjectives, descriptions of a medical issue (epilepsy), graphic sexual content of the slash variety. Summary: Mike has synesthesia, which turns out to be a blessing, a bit of a curse, and an unconventional way to finally

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[firefox1490]

*sing song* YOU'RE AWESOME

[phreakycat]

Thank you! *bows*

GOD.

[kimmilein]

Hottest. Thing. I. Have. EVER. Read. And I read a crapload of fic. I cannot even tell you how incredible this was. Did I mention that it was HOT????

Oh, and the "harem of virgins riding unicorns" while they were picking Harvey's coffee beans made me giggle quite madly. That was made of awesome.

Re: GOD.

[phreakycat]

Oh, wow, thanks! That makes me all warm and tingly! LOL I couldn't resist virgins on unicorns. You just KNOW Harvey has stupidly extravagant shit just for the sake of having stupidly extravagant shit - like if he ate M&Ms they'd have to be organic South American chocolate with the Ms hand painted on by blind monks or something, and then Mike would stuff and handful into his mouth and get chocolate all over his face and Harvey'd be all DUDE YOU JUST SWALLOWED $1,500 WORTH OF CHOCOLATE WITHOUT EVEN CHEWING IT and then he'd lick the chocolate off Mike's mouth.

Re: GOD.

[kimmilein]

You totally just made me giggle again. I'm right there with you with the custom-made M&Ms....

I cannot tell you how much I am loving this story - your usage of imagery and color in this fic is simply masterful. I keep rereading it and rereading it. I can't wait for the next part!!!! Thank you so much for sharing your talent!

Re: GOD.

[phreakycat]

Aw, you're too kind! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment, it really means a lot! I'm really, really glad you're enjoying it.

[snappi22]

Ummmm I don't think there are words that appropriately convey how awesome you and your story are (and OMG all the gay!sex ::sigh::) I will just be sitting here anxiously and impatiently awaiting the next part.

[phreakycat]

LOL thank you. Gay sex is a wonderful thing, no? :) Suck it, Westboro Baptist Church!

[mrsreynolds13]

I think I just died. Oh my God, that was amazing! You already know I'm in love with how you write so that's a given, right?
I'm not going to lie, at first I felt a tiny bit cheated because it looked as if you'd abandoned the synesthesia. But man was I wrong about that; you just approached it in a different way that literally made my toes curl with pleasure. The way Harvey asks what he tastes like made me giddy, and then you gave us the Best. Sex. Ever. Written. You have nothing to worry about there, trust me. Nothing at all. In fact, I think you should do it some more :)
Oh and I hope you feel better soon <3
PS Is it hilarious that I couldn't help worrying about how messy Harvey's couch was going to be afterwards? ;)

[phreakycat]

LOL Thanks! I'm not sure I've ever made someone's toes curl with fic before *checks it off of bucket list*

I actually thought about the fact that they were going to make that expensive Siberian goosedown comforter all messy, too. But I figured Harvey's got a great dry cleaner who knows not to ask questions and it would be a bit of a mood killer for Harvey to be all HOLD UP LET ME JUST GO GET A TOWEL TO PUT DOWN, and we know Harvey's too suave to ever kill a mood. XD

[mrsreynolds13]

i just snorted at that last bit. I kinda love you <3

[phreakycat]

LOL I'm pretty sure sex is the only thing that trumps neatness in Harvey's book. :)

*loves you back*

[eofgldv]

oh my god... wow... I need a cold shower.

[phreakycat]

LOL thanks, that's high praise! :)