Fic: "Lit Up" 3/4, Suits, Harvey/Mike NC-17

[phreakycat]

Title: Lit Up Chapter: One Genre: H/C, slash Word Count: Roughly 12,000 at current count. Warnings: Language, overuse of color adjectives, descriptions of a medical issue (epilepsy), graphic sexual content of the slash variety. Summary: Mike has synesthesia, which turns out to be a blessing, a bit of a curse, and an unconventional way to finally

Comments

[phreakycat]

Thank you! Smooth Harvey is indeed smooth.

Sometimes when I'm writing him I swear I can hear his voice in my head saying things like I'd never say that, and stop using so many contractions in my speech. I'm far more articulate than you're making me out to be.

[phreakycat]

Thank you! (Is it appropriate to say "you're welcome" for melting someone's brain? I'm not sure of the etiquette here LOL)

[phreakycat]

Thank you! LOL I suppose probably NOT good work reading material, but I'm glad you're enjoying it! *fans you*

[phreakycat]

Wow, really? Thanks! I never thought I'd feel honored to be pimped!

[phreakycat]

Thanks! I'm so glad people actually seem to like this chapter, I was so worried!

[musical_emjay]

Speaking as someone who also wrote an absurdly explicit sex scene recently for pretty much the first time ever, I FEEL YOUR ANXIETY. But you have nothing to worry about, this was gorgeously intimate and immersive and sexy as HELL. Ugh, when Harvey asks Mike what his name tastes like...god, WHY IS THAT SO HOT. GAHHH. *claws at face*

Great job, and I can't wait to read the last part! :D

[phreakycat]

Haha, your face-clawing made me LOL. It's so scary posting porn, isn't it? But thank you for the very kind feedback on this chapter, it soothes my anxiety. And I'm glad I'm not the only one who finds the idea of Harvey being all HOW DO I TASTE, BE-ATCH being hawt. XD