Comments | phreakycat: Fic: "Lit Up" 3/4, Suits, Harvey/Mike NC-17

phreakycat

Fic: "Lit Up" 3/4, Suits, Harvey/Mike NC-17

Aug 17, 2011 23:45

Title: Lit Up Chapter: One Genre: H/C, slash Word Count: Roughly 12,000 at current count. Warnings: Language, overuse of color adjectives, descriptions of a medical issue (epilepsy), graphic sexual content of the slash variety. Summary: Mike has synesthesia, which turns out to be a blessing, a bit of a curse, and an unconventional way to finally ( Read more... )

porn, slash, harvey/mike, fic, suits, h/c

Comments 75

jewishnotamish7 August 18 2011, 15:18:50 UTC

Holy crap...
I have loved your writing style in general but now you've added tasteful and super hot porn to the mix? *gasps* It's too much for me and my brain...gah!
This story is wonderful-I've always been interested in synesthesia and now I get to see it applied creatively by a wonderful author in a fun new fandom. Yay summer!
Thanks so much for sharing!

phreakycat August 18 2011, 17:23:35 UTC

Thanks! *fans you and your brain* It warms the cockles of my heart to hear this chapter referred to as "tasteful and super hot", because I definitely wanted it to be hot, but I didn't want it to be cheap or exploitative, ya know? So thank you. :)

bloody_beary August 18 2011, 15:28:24 UTC

HEE!!!

phreakycat August 18 2011, 17:23:56 UTC

LOL, is that a good sound? :)

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phreakycat August 18 2011, 17:24:24 UTC

LOL more soon, just working through editing the final chapter. :)

nayahchan August 18 2011, 17:31:33 UTC

HAHAHAHA, Your A/N is so lulzy, I loveee it! :D

This chapter is so fantastic! I loved how open Mike was with Harvey and how understanding Harvey was inturn with mike.

AND THEN THERE WAS A WONDERFULLY DONE INTIMATE SCENE! :D. For some weird reason,the sex part of such scenes don't really turn me on(I blame Anatomy class and sex-ed). It's the things people do before hand, like the stray hands feeling, breathy talking, and intimacy you had. Especially when Harvey asked what his name tasted li-jskbhdkuhhduihds yummy O_O.

Loverlyy!! ~Nayah

phreakycat August 18 2011, 17:42:27 UTC

LOL I'm glad you were amused! XD

I'm with you in regard to the whole "intimacy is hotter than just fucking" bit. Don't get me wrong, I DO like the actual mechanics of gettin' it on in fics, too, but for me all those tiny little intimate gestures like brushing fingers over someone's spine or breathing against their skin are just... GUH. So much hotter than just boning LOL.

theeonenonly August 18 2011, 20:05:55 UTC

Oh, you ain't got anything to worry about, honey. The porn is AMAZING, as is the story. :)

phreakycat August 18 2011, 20:23:32 UTC

LOL Thank you! Good to hear! XD