Fic: "Lit Up" 4/4, Suits, Harvey/Mike, NC-17

Aug 27, 2011 00:28

Title: Lit Up

Chapter: Four

Genre: H/C, slash

Word Count: Roughly 12,000 at current count.

Warnings: Language, overuse of color adjectives, descriptions of a medical issue (epilepsy), graphic sexual content of the slash variety.

Summary: Mike has synesthesia, which turns out to be a blessing, a bit of a curse, and an unconventional way to finally get ( Read more... )

porn, slash, harvey/mike, fic, suits, h/c

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phreakycat August 26 2011, 22:53:57 UTC
LOL glad you liked it! Harvey TOTALLY likes Mikes best. It's canon *nods*. And after I wrote the part about the powerpoint I couldn't stop wishing Donna HAD made it, so I prompted something along those lines at the kink meme. Someone has graciously started filling it (and it rocks!) so you should check it out here: http://suitsmeme.livejournal.com/2038.html?thread=3097846#t3154422

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musical_emjay August 26 2011, 22:45:52 UTC
God, this fic is just...unbearably romantic, and in a way that doesn't turn the characters into dewey-eyed caricatures of themselves. Everything is perfect. I love the little bits of humor, and those moments that just so simple and succinct but that stun me with how hot they are. The synesthesia is such a novel idea, I don't think I've ever seen it used in fic before, and I'm so glad you decided to use your own experiences to flesh out this world so beautifully. Thank you so much for writing this. I can't wait to see what you do next! :)

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phreakycat August 26 2011, 22:57:21 UTC
Aw, thank you! That's so kind! I'm so, SO glad that it came across as romantic without crossing that boundary into cheesy, sappy, OOC-ness. That's one of my pet peeves in fic, so I'm super paranoid about falling into that pitfall myself! It can be really hard trying to write something that differs from canon without messing up the things that make canon so great, you know?

But your comment made me all tingly, so thanks! :)

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phreakycat August 26 2011, 23:25:27 UTC
Thank you so much! I am starting to feel a bit better, thank goodness!

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coldryuuza August 27 2011, 08:02:15 UTC
WHOA¡ my brain had a happy time trying to imagine what Mike was seeing as he listened to everybody's voice :DDDDD love this fic¡

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phreakycat August 27 2011, 11:48:55 UTC
Thank you! And your userpic - so cute! *squeee!*

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ruggerdavey August 27 2011, 17:35:34 UTC
This was just so beautiful and wonderful and an amazing way to end such an amazing fic. It is definitely going down as one of my perpetual favorites. Loved it.

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phreakycat August 28 2011, 01:39:49 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it, and it really means a lot to me and makes me feel so honored that you think of it as a favorite. *hugs you*

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