nice work, some very *hot* visual imagery there, most enjoyable after a long day of reading HR textbooks. Although, you did abruptly switch from past to present tense and than back again, was that intentional?
Nice. I like that the toy conveyed each other's emotions -- that's what I find sexy. Though I'm surprised they didn't pass out -- maybe that's what the third button will do.
I like that the toy conveyed each other's emotions -- that's what I find sexy.
me, too -- i'm glad we were on the same wavelength there... i my mind, i envision harry and draco in the wizrds porn shoppe looking at this wand and the guy behind the counter just snickering knowingly like "oh, just you two lads wait til you try those buttons....!"
Though I'm surprised they didn't pass out -- maybe that's what the third button will do.
Well, if I'm going to have a fic dedicated to me, it may as well be one that can curl my toes and melt my knickers! Ha ha ha! Mercy. *takes a drink of ice water* That was extremely hot. Thank you!
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Great work overall though.
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No, I thought I caught them all (verb tenses), I guess I missed a couple.
:goes back to correct:
good eye, tho!
i'm glad you enjoyed it!
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me, too -- i'm glad we were on the same wavelength there... i my mind, i envision harry and draco in the wizrds porn shoppe looking at this wand and the guy behind the counter just snickering knowingly like "oh, just you two lads wait til you try those buttons....!"
Though I'm surprised they didn't pass out -- maybe that's what the third button will do.
;)
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less-than three
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(three) 3
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basically just me being a g33k.
:pouts:
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