Comments | physixxx_phixxx: ... two out of three ain't bad ... (H/D)

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... two out of three ain't bad ... (H/D)

Jul 12, 2006 12:50

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smut, oneshots, harry/draco, prompt-challenge

Comments 35

phrasemuffin July 13 2006, 15:19:02 UTC

just a few tense troubles
other than that... all I can say is "you should write this smutty goodness a lot more often. It's good."

I don't know if you have had a chance to change these yet (or if they are intentional), but I thought I'd just point them out to you - I know how easy it is to miss things in your own work.
- Before he can finish the answer, Draco’s mouth captured his.
- ...every breathless moment Draco has ever suffered...
- This time, Harry’s cry of pleasure is drowned out by Draco’s equally loud exclamations...
- by which the energies can pass

=D

physixxx July 13 2006, 15:49:28 UTC

:ack!: i thought i caught all of those!!

thanks for the heads-up! you, and a couple others, have really helped with this quickie. ;)

:hugs:

tomxfelton July 13 2006, 16:31:13 UTC

*drools* Now, what does that third button do? *grins* And really, 15 minutes? Must be some talent (though the hotness of this fic already stated that, just a confirmation really) to do it so fast and this.. detailed. If it were me I'd just be walking around with a grin plastered all over my face for a couple of days and that would be it, lol.

physixxx July 13 2006, 16:53:36 UTC

thanks! i'm glad you enjoyed it.

well, the 15-20 minutes that it took basically is the reason why it was so riddled with errors. thankfully, most of the reviewers that spotted them were kind enough to point them out. :hugs them all:

but, yeah... i can spit out some words when the mood strikes. it just takes time to polish the shit with a fair bit of shinola. ;)