Comments | pic_fic: Personal Private Time by Yin, SGA, McKay/Sheppard, NC-17

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Personal Private Time by Yin, SGA, McKay/Sheppard, NC-17

Mar 09, 2007 21:56

Title: Personal Private Time
Author: Yin
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Author's Notes: Big, huge thanks to lallybroch and thegrrrl2000 for beta. Of course, I added stuff after they were done, so any remaining errors are mine alone. Also, Grrrl made my porn romantic. It's totally her fault. Unless you like it, and then it was all me. ;>
Summary: John gets caught ( Read more... )

Comments 135

thegrrrl2002 March 10 2007, 03:09:55 UTC

Oh, yay! I love what you added. Especially the ending, it's as perfect as their kiss.

He didn't stop until his forehead was pressed to Rodney's hip, turning to take in the a perfect view of his hand, moving in long, languid strokes.

Oooh, now that I really love. It's quite the image. *g*

Thank you so much for sharing this!

yin_again March 10 2007, 03:12:15 UTC

I'm so glad you liked the changes! I loved that image, too - it just flashed through my mind. I wish it had stayed a while. *wistful*

Thank you agian for the beta!

thegrrrl2002 March 10 2007, 04:10:55 UTC

It was my pleasure!

an_kayoh March 10 2007, 03:11:23 UTC

Uh. Guh.

*lacks coherency*

Except to say:

contemplating the fact that I'll never be able to jerk off again

Yeah, there's something about the thought of being caught that cools things off.

yin_again March 10 2007, 03:12:58 UTC

Heh. poor John. Somehow I think he'll overcome it. :>

I'm so glad you liked it.

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yin_again March 10 2007, 03:40:21 UTC

Thank you, honey! That pic was just...guh...and I wrote it really fast. Then I sent it to Grrrl, who made me write more at the end. She said it was mean to not let Rodney get off. I think she was right. ;> I'm so glad you liked it. Also, I have your gpfg_studios" fic open in a tab. LJ was very prolific while I was gone for 5 hours. Sheesh.

filenotch March 10 2007, 03:42:15 UTC

So why is my partner stuck somewhere until tomorrow due to aircraft problems?

I want to see the pre-romance version.

yin_again March 10 2007, 03:52:21 UTC

It stopped at "You look like you're pretty good at it."

And sorry your honey is far away. Maybe you should give him a call. *leer*

filenotch March 10 2007, 04:06:07 UTC

Well, it was the combination of photo and fic, and the fact that they guy in the picture wasn't waxed within an inch of his life. I almost volunteered to beta this when you asked, and now I wonder what you would have done with conflicting input. I don't know I'd have pushed the romance buttons in the same way.

yin_again March 10 2007, 04:14:28 UTC

Yeah, I liked the pic guy's chest hair - that waxing thing is just...ew. I don't know either - I literally write it in half an hour, then redid the endin after Grrrl looked at it, so, you know, not exactly my most cerebral work. ;>

xylohypha March 10 2007, 04:05:41 UTC

"John," Rodney moaned, and John turned his head up enough to rub his chin against Rodney's hip and look into his blazing blue eyes.

Oh, yeaahhhh. And you don't even have to mention scratchy along with that look and no wonder Rodney shuddered and came.

And the kiss at the end. Now, I'm all happy and grinning like an idiot. Thank you.

yin_again March 10 2007, 04:12:26 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! I kinda loved that image of John looking up, too.