I've finished the first, rough draft of the bothersome scene from yesterday (it will need some serious reworking, I'm afraid, but at least it's done for now) and started the next one.
Excerpt: She tried to resist with all her might. Despite her previous denial, she remembered all too well how the dream had continued: with Koss's arrival, with him trying to drag her away and with her killing him. She did not want to relive that. It had been disturbing enough at the first time.
Not a lot today, even by flash fiction standards because of other things I had to do... but both of the ones I have started so far are roughly fleshed out and ready for proper edits and polishing. And given I am concentrating on short fiction, that makes me happy :)
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She tried to resist with all her might. Despite her previous denial, she remembered all too well how the dream had continued: with Koss's arrival, with him trying to drag her away and with her killing him. She did not want to relive that. It had been disturbing enough at the first time.
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Good.
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I managed to squeeze in a few lines again, all I can do currently with how busy I am.
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Our Picowrimo Mottos this time around are:
Write Something, Anything!
and
More Than Zero!
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Good number.
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Sounds good to me.
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