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kit_kitgoesusa April 23 2011, 16:41:06 UTC
“I need to talk to you,” he says seriously.
Mark doesn‘t sit up even though Eduardo’s blocking the sun. The view is nice, he thinks lazily, Eduardo’s arms smooth and tanned and his hair a soft, tangled mess.
I love how Mark is all lazy arrogance even though he’s been worried about Eduardo for days. And your description of Wardo was so simple yet so effective ^^

“It’s Divya,” Eduardo says. “He’s being sent to live abroad and his plane leaves in an hour.”
“So?” Mark asks.
“Cameron’s really torn up about it. The guy can’t even bring himself to get out of bed in the morning. He refuses to shave.”
And when a Winklevoss refuses to shave, it’s serious! I love that Eduardo cares <3 And Dustin, always so articulate around Chris :D

Eduardo gives him a bemused little look through the rearview mirror. “They’re people too, you know. They have feelings.”
“Too many feelings, maybe,” Mark says. “Tyler is way too attached to his footwear.”
I could not stop laughing at that, hahaha, excellent callback XD

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kit_kitgoesusa April 23 2011, 17:14:34 UTC
She told him curly hair meant curly thoughts and how that equated greatness, how Mark was going to do something extraordinary with his life, just he wait. And Mark believed her with all of his heart, even at five, his hands cupped, palm-up and outstretched, to catch the tendrils of hair she would cut before they fell on the floor.
THIS! ARGH! This was so BEAUTIFUL!
Also, I have corkscrew curls, this made me so happy <3 I shall put it in my book!
(I have a notebook in which I write quotes I love, everything from Albert Einstein to Fairly OddParents and this is going in there)

He thinks about that now, listening to the steady purr of his laptop next to his head. Then he thinks about Eduardo but in an abstract way, his eyes which are more hazel than brown, his dark hair fluttering like crow feathers, and then his hands, cupping Mark’s shoulders that time they went biking down the pier, Eduardo’s laugh echoing inside Mark’s ear like the hum of the ocean.
Okay, this is freaking it, I WILL MARRY YOU! This is so perfect!

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