Correction - Part 2

[piggywhale]

Title: CORRECTION (Part 2)        
Word count: 10,653 words (in 2 parts)
Pairing: Ohba
Genre: Drama, Angst, Non-AU & Aiba-centric
Rating: R
Summary: The signs are always there but Aiba never notices.

Note: The story was originally written for the lovely mangamistrezz in arashiawards. Big Thanks to my awesome beta-reader silverdoll14 without whom this story would never end up making

Comments

[dn_nura]

Awww my feels goes to Ohba.. it's painful when there's uncertainty, then leads to misunderstanding, and unnecessary hurt to the heart.. glad to know they turn out alright at the end *grin*
I enjoyed reading the story. Thank you!

[piggywhale]

I felt so sorry for them while writing it too >_< At least they cleared things up at the end. Phewww~

Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

[shade_serenade]

omg this is so beautiful....... its been a long time since i feel this way when i read fic.... a job well done!!!!!!

[piggywhale]

Aww...you just made me blushed. Thank you for the compliment. I am so happy you find it beautiful. <3 Thank you for reading it.

[freyjasername]

!!!!!!! This is beautifully written! ;~;
I feel sorry for these two and the rest of the members :(

[piggywhale]

Thank you for reading :)

Yeah, I feel bad for all of them too. No one was really happy (until things changed at the very end). Sorry about that :p

[mars_anch]

I'm glad that finally all of them are happy... in the end, I'm so relieve from Aiba-chan sadness... ;)

[piggywhale]

I am glad you are happy with the ending :D. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

[khaulabear]

]the angst is real
poor ohno .. he just didnt know how to express his feeling
and aiba being oblivious ..huhuuhuhu
i love the scene where they took care of each other
it was sad when nino was hurt
nice one ^^

[piggywhale]

Yea, Ohno is a victim in this one. He probably thought he had said or done enough to let Aiba knew how he truly feel. But Aiba didn't process all those signs. >_<

I was sad when Nino was hurt too. He probably got affected by this two's actions (and inactions) the most among all other members. Ninooo~~

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. <3