WV: Quick Fic: The Boy Who Cried Wolf

[pinkphoenix1985]

Title: The Boy Who Cried Wolf
Prompt: Crying Wolf and Vitamin B
Bonus? no
Word Count: 260
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Original
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con etc): Character death
Summary: Jon loved to play dangerous games. He always got away with it until one day when he didn't.

Comments

[agirlnamedluna]

This was a well thought out piece, giving just enough details about Jon and his strange behaviour for it all to make sense. Talk about a lesson learned though,
In paragraph two it think you may mean his mom and dad rather than nanny as you mention both his parents earlier in correlation to the incident that set off his seek for thrills.

[pinkphoenix1985]

Thanks for the catch. I thought that I had changed all of the nanny mentions. Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it.

[lostandalone22]

Great story!!