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Fic- Gather No Moss - Part 2 of 2

Sep 05, 2012 06:32

Title: Gather No Moss
Author: pirl
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: not mine,yadda yadda
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Noah

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( Gather No Moss - Part 2 )

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Comments 20

cindyls1969 September 5 2012, 14:05:22 UTC

Awww, sweet and beautiful. I love Luke being possessive and vulnerable and I love Noah having found himself. I don't think they would have worked otherwise!

pirl September 18 2012, 03:42:09 UTC

I'm a firm believer that damaged people don't make for solid relationships. Noah got there first, and he's showing Luke the way. ;)

Glad you liked it!

123cariad September 5 2012, 15:27:01 UTC

Fabulous loved over protective Luke and the love scene was perfect ,, had me going for minute thought the baby was theirs lol great story every thing turned out for the best every one happy and loved up with who they are supposed to be with lol great and continuation of Luke and Noah's story xxx

pirl September 18 2012, 03:43:18 UTC

Hee! I was hoping that people would think the baby was there's. I'm a fan of misleading readers. ;)

Thanks for reading!

carolinablu85 September 6 2012, 14:58:50 UTC

So cute! I love how it continued your story from last year, you have a great feel for the characters in this universe, and Javi and Brett were great additions to the fold :) Great job!

pirl September 18 2012, 03:44:22 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad Brett and Javi are so well received. I fell in love with them while writing, so it's awesome that others seem to dig them too.

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it!

crownroyal_51 September 9 2012, 00:46:43 UTC

Awesome story! This was a great follow up to your story from last year. Luke feeling like a fish out of water in Noah's new life was realistic. I love the way you handled it. And their reunion sex was hot and sweet!

pirl September 18 2012, 03:46:16 UTC

their reunion sex was hot and sweet!

Thanks for that, it's been a while since I've written one. And with all the charged emotions it was faaaaaar from an easy task!

seajellybaby September 11 2012, 22:28:04 UTC

"One. We waited SO LONG to have sex the first time around, so I think it would perfectly fair if we borrowed from that time bank."

AGREED! Totally love this logic!

This is just perfect and brilliant and everything good! You're an incredibly emotional writer and your understanding of the characters spot on!

Especially enjoyed Luke losing it with Javi! HaHa! Poor guy! That green dragon is a powerful one!! And this more grown up Noah handled the whole situation with such understanding and clear headedness!

pirl September 18 2012, 03:48:19 UTC

Hee! It's patented pirl logic. I'm always borrowing from the past to explain away the present. ;)

Thanks for the praise! It really means a lot. I loved writing it, even tho it gave me fits from time to time. Especially the fight scene--no idea why that one was so hard to do. I'm glad you liked it... sadist. Kidding! ;)