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kiiroikemuri March 4 2012, 22:23:48 UTC
I loved this~ especially the last line :D
Lu han seems so vulnerable, like he'd break if anything happens to him. He has this melancholic aura around him, idk. And I actually have a similar image of him being like this Lu Han, he seems to be quiet but a really good observant, and because he has to deal with so much cultural changes he's like a lot more careful about his words and actions.
I found Kai the most interesting in this because we're all labelled, we want it or not, and once people label you as something you won't changed it easily, and because he has to deal with such important labels it's not strange he forgets to act his age.

I'm in love with your writing~ I hope you write more about them in the future :D
-sorry if I'm not coherent, english isn't my first language!-

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chiharu March 4 2012, 22:34:21 UTC
Yes, well, that's definitely the image SM is selling us in terms of Lu Han, but I definitely agree with your melancholic description. But I think, in general, all of the chinese boys have dealt with the cultural shift as well.

But yeah :/ Poor Kai doesn't deserve all this backlash. The boy works super hard and he was the most anticipated member slated for debut, even back in the M1/M2 days. *pets him*

I'm glad you like my writing! Thanks for reading!

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eoryndal March 12 2012, 03:20:49 UTC
ASJDHAJSDGJHK SO MANY EXO FEELS RN

Sehun wants nothing more than to coexist in the same plane as Lu Han
*cries* I wish exo m and k could just stay together foreber

Lu Han has a terrible desire to be someone special, even if it’s within a small realm. He has always been too thin, too quiet, too feminine.
Oh bb, it's okay. I love you ;___; I can totally see him being conflicted over his image. I wanna put him in a huge pocket and keep him safely away from haters/overly critical netizens.

Kai fluctuates on the fence of never being good enough and what’s so special about you?
This really got to me. He's going to have to live up to high expectations.

In Kai’s mind, Sehun will always be 17, and Kai will always be in the place farthest from his own dreams.
Just... *crying again*

Wae so tragic and bittersweet and?

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chiharu March 12 2012, 03:24:27 UTC
I was on an introspective kick when I wrote this meeeeep. I'll try to write happier EXO fics in the future~

Thanks for reading!

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suju15_4life March 30 2012, 23:07:04 UTC
Finally I found an EXO fan fic!
Yesh, OT3! ;3
I've been looking around to see if there's any trace of EXO on LJ, and that's when I discovered this fic!
Thanks for writing it, and hope you write more EXO fan fics soon!

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chiharu March 30 2012, 23:16:22 UTC
You should check sonyeoncheonji and under my EXO tag! There's also exochocolate for your other EXO needs :) thanks for reading!

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sardothien April 20 2012, 06:59:57 UTC
THIS IS SEVERAL KINDS OF GORGEOUS.

"Kai fluctuates on the fence of never being good enough and what’s so special about you?" this lineeee ugh already mentioned in other comments but this was a terrific depiction of all three of them. right now i feel it's really hard for all of the exo fandom to write fic about them because we're just barely getting to know all the members but you hit this one right on the head.

stunning. :)

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falsetheorem May 4 2012, 15:30:26 UTC
Lu Han is Sehun in another reality, yet Sehun wants nothing more than to coexist in the same plane as Lu Han.

this line is absolutely beautiful. how they are duplicates of each other in K & M. i like the way sehun craves for lu han because im a shipper like that :Db
i also rly rly love murakami, if that was the nor wood you were referring to, since so many works were based off that song.

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