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[EXO] 独生子; Only Son (1/1)

Jul 14, 2012 00:58

Title: 独生子; Only Son
Fandom: EXO
Author: chiharu
Characters/pairing: Kris centric
Rating: G
wordcount: ~ 4.5k
Summary: Kris tries to grasp what it means to be a leader, an idol, and a son. Leadership doesn't come naturally, but friendship and camaraderie do. Kris + EXO-M fic.

( Beijing is blazing and humid, causing the back of Wu Fan's shirt to stick to his body. Their idol status affords them air conditioning that Wu Fan has long since forfeited during his summers in China, back when dusty fans and cold mung bean soup were the only remedies for the sun. )

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Comments 52

xiahness July 14 2012, 05:42:14 UTC

I must say, I love your characterization of Kris. It's just the right amount of his stage persona and what he seems to be in real life.
Most fics just depict him as some domineering alpha male, lol, and I think you were able to capture much more faucets of his personality.
It was definitely a good read - the fight with Luhan, the emotions involved, learning from Joonmyeon, his stress as a leader, gah. It all melded together so perfectly! :)
I also feel like you have one of the best characterizations of EXO in general! :D I definitely enjoyed it~

Thanks for sharing!^^

chiharu July 15 2012, 01:26:44 UTC

Lol yesss. it's always fun to tap into the... sensitivity behind that dominant alpha male.

Thank you for reading!

exoz July 14 2012, 07:27:17 UTC

Best fic for the day. Need this kind of fic in the fandom more. Where it's Band!fic and NOT about them being cracky heh. I rally like it. Kris feels so real and HUMANE here. and the others too.

chiharu July 15 2012, 01:28:23 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!

enen_chan July 14 2012, 09:05:22 UTC

This was a lovely fic to read upon waking up~ Love these kinds of fics, where there's less crack and more ... realism, let's say...~~~ Really liking the different sides to Kris' personality that you've characterised~~~

And it's perfectly fine zongzi in June! That's when you're supposed to eat it! haha~~~ dammit, I want some now... We didn't make any this year... ;_; sads... CHINESE FOOD!!!! ^^

chiharu July 14 2012, 23:58:49 UTC

I want some zongzi too!! And see the dragon boat festival ;~;

Thanks for reading!

jejun July 14 2012, 10:46:43 UTC

Loved this! &hears; I liked your characterisation here! I sort of feel this way, like Kris feels that he needs to protect everyone, and luhan always worrying about whether he's good enough and yixing controlling his pain and just going on with the show. Really well written :)

chiharu July 15 2012, 01:32:09 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

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chiharu July 14 2012, 23:59:09 UTC

Thank you for reading!