Comments | pitza: at home, with the boys, uninvited.

pitza

at home, with the boys, uninvited.

Aug 16, 2005 03:40

Title: Conflict of Interest, pt. 2
Rating: R/NC-17 (smuttage).
Pairing: Nick/Greg (CSI)
Warnings/Spoilers: Follows part 1. Futurefic.
Summary: In which Nick and Greg find out that they're too old for some of the more 'challenging' positions in the Book.

Note: It's official. I've been awake for 48 hours. What's an insomniac to do when there's ( Read more... )

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Comments 14

fixmein_45 August 16 2005, 03:17:16 UTC

Yum yum, I say. If that is what insomnia does to you, I can't wait 'til you've got some sleep. ^-^ My favourite line has to be:

He listens to Greg babbling off the periodic table and telling Nick dirty things in Norwegian (not that he knows what they mean).

It makes me squirm because I'm weird. Fab story.

pitza August 16 2005, 07:29:20 UTC

*grin* thanks!

*hangs head* still can't sleep. usually smut helps me sleep... hmm...

paradise4writin August 16 2005, 03:52:21 UTC

GAH!

*is dead*

pitza August 16 2005, 07:30:06 UTC

*does a quick CPR*

*grin* I wish it'd knock me out... me need sleep. If not, things are going to get really weird...

kalimyre August 16 2005, 07:00:17 UTC

OMG love. So sweet, so calm and comfortable and happy with each other. Also, this? "You," Greg whispers, "can still talk?" Love that. Made me giggle madly. Greg being all note-taking and book-reading and scientific and Nick just wanting to get to it because, you know, naked Greg. Not so much helping with the patience. *g* Fabulous story.

pitza August 16 2005, 07:31:07 UTC

:)

Greg wants to be the next Grissom. And he's older now, so he's grown up a bit, trying to get his priorities straight. Unfortunately, he's not quite *there* yet. Poor Nicky too.

Who can resist a nekkid Greg?

df_chipz August 16 2005, 09:47:52 UTC

"No more Kamasutra experiments," Nick gripes.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

...

*g*

pitza August 16 2005, 10:02:06 UTC

I think... it's not that Nick doesn't want it. It's just that the process takes too long, refering to books and being very scientific like that. And I don't think he has any patience for that. At least not when he can still get it up no problem.

I'm sure it'll come in handy when they hit a... *cough* dry spell *cough*

(like's that gonna happen. I mean, two hawt guys running out of ideas? they're sex on sticks, for goodness sake)

oh well. things happen.

*grin*

serenity151979 August 16 2005, 15:14:44 UTC

FANTASTIC! I'm far too exicted to be any more coherent than that! Hotness, lovely lovely hotness! Adored this! YAY! *runs around the room squeeing*

pitza August 16 2005, 16:13:57 UTC

*grin* Glad you liked it. I was a bit worried, it wouldn't come out coherent. But hey! who's coherent in the midst of sex.

*grin* watch out for the furniture.

And don't you think it's great that the ngchallenge is wank!fic?

*loves* and you! you need to write porn too. Because you write GREAT porn!

serenity151979 August 16 2005, 16:23:38 UTC

I'm still waiting for that elusive plot bunny to nibble at my toes! I want to do the Wank!fic justice!

pitza August 16 2005, 16:28:03 UTC

OOOOOH. Will wait for that plot bunny to surface. 'm sure it'll come. Bunnies are notoriously quick in coming (uh. pun very intended).