Comments | pixiebelle: LJ Idol Week 19: I Can't Get Calm

pixiebelle

Apr 19, 2020 23:12

CW: mention of rape, miscarriage, abuse

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bleodswean April 19 2020, 21:29:05 UTC

This piece is filled with pain. Good job world-building!

pixiebelle April 19 2020, 21:50:03 UTC

Thank you. This was going to be part of a longer piece. My idea was way too big. Shortening it for Idol was a challenge, but I hope it worked out.

ragnarok_08 April 19 2020, 22:29:33 UTC

Oh wow - this was compelling, heartwrenching, and evocative , all in one piece - well done!!

d0gs April 19 2020, 23:41:25 UTC

This was so heart-breaking D: but SO well written!!

tonithegreat April 20 2020, 14:11:27 UTC

Oh dang, I see what you mean about having a lot to fit into an idol sized piece here! I think you managed it though. Well done!

karmasoup April 21 2020, 19:23:59 UTC

Goodness. This one's so evocative, it's hard to take. You did a great job with packing a lot in here.