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May 19, 2006 15:58

I was writing a Bella-centric fic. I was. I swear. And then I got bunnied by my own comment over at SCUSA. Padmoon must be as addicted to me as I am to it, because it refuses to relinquish me even for the time it takes to write one Bella-centric.

The Best Laid Plans (HP; R/S; 5,515 words; PG-13 for language and implication, I suppose.)

( And they’ve already heard my rendition of 'Penny Lane,' remember I sang it on the platform fourth year, so it's not like they can be any more horrified by me then they already are. )

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pixiechan May 19 2006, 22:42:59 UTC

Thankee kindly.

aylaranzz May 19 2006, 21:12:03 UTC

Awww!! I really liked this. I liked the way Remus stood up to his father and Sirius talking to Remus' mother. I felt so bad for Sirius tho when he told Remus about telling his own parents and James' parents. But they were so adorable at the end ^_^

pixiechan May 19 2006, 22:42:39 UTC

Merci beaucoup! I try :D

liseuse May 19 2006, 22:09:49 UTC

Oh that was adorable! I loved Sirius' declaration of how much he loves Remus, and Remus standing up to his dad. Also, that was a very interesting take on why Remus was bitten.

You might want to get a quick britpick done on it if you're interested. I noticed a couple of things, and it niggled ever so slightly.

pixiechan May 19 2006, 22:41:54 UTC

<33333333 thanks!

...yeah, I probably should. The plotbunnies were gnawing my ear off, so I was not nearly as careful as I should have been. ^^' Sorry to niggle.

lucky_moony May 19 2006, 22:33:53 UTC

I loved it! IT WAS JUST...GUH!

“Sirius. You’re the one who sang ‘Penny Lane,’ aren’t you?”

Loll!

pixiechan May 19 2006, 22:42:12 UTC

Hahaha, I'm glad you liked.

jo_yumegari May 19 2006, 22:46:14 UTC

pixiechan May 19 2006, 22:57:48 UTC

Merci!