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[pixiefiction]

I was writing a Bella-centric fic. I was. I swear. And then I got bunnied by my own comment over at SCUSA. Padmoon must be as addicted to me as I am to it, because it refuses to relinquish me even for the time it takes to write one Bella-centric.

The Best Laid Plans (HP; R/S; 5,515 words; PG-13 for language and implication, I suppose.)

Comments

[pixiechan]

Aww, thank you! I like it that my fic was coo-worthy. :D

[sleeper6]

This is going in my memories. So good! Really, it's so well-written; you really let the characters express themselves. I, for one, especially love when Remus and Sirius declare their love for one another out loud. And I love the idea of this fic--telling Remus's parents makes for an interesting story.

You made me melt and tear up with this:
. . . thinking how much he loves this, that the most mundane of tasks are made brilliant and beautiful by this man’s sheer presence. He is so, so lucky.
Geez, that's deep.

And these bits were so good:
And as long as there was going to be a Sirius, I was going to fall in love with him.
AND
I’m not a girl but that’s hardly my fault or his, and there isn’t a girl in the world who could love him as much as I do...
Awwww.

Loved everything about this. Oh, and the Sirius/Mrs. Lupin dynamic plays out very well. Gotta love nervous!Sirius. :)

[pixiechan]

I seriously, seriously love it when people tell me they're memory-ing my stuff. Thank you SO much.
Try not to melt too much, we're still having to clean chocolate frog out of the carpet after all.

Oh, and nervous!Sirius is totally my favourite sort. (Well, that and CulinaryAdventures!Sirius) Which is why I'm so glad people liked this fic, it was really fun for me to write.

[pixiechan]

Did you suffocate in it? ;P
Thank you sooo much!

(PS- your icon is one of my favourite shoebox quotes of all time.)

[aquila_star]

Oh that was just too lovely. Really, you write the pups so beautifully. Wow. They are both so grown up now.

Wonbderful. :D

[pixiechan]

Thank you so much! It makes me really, really happy when people like how I write them. <3

ps- where's the quote on your icon from? because anything that goes with shoebox!puppies is something i must know about.

[aquila_star]

Honestly the quote eludes me. I can't recall if it is straight from Shoebox...it's been too long since I read it. Plus I nabbed the icon, so I am clueless.

It's amazingly perfect though.

[pixiechan]

Not from shoebox, I'd know. *is frighteningly obsessive*

[konishi_zen]

This was really sweet (without being saccharine)and perfect. I love how Sirius really *tries* for Remus. This is a perfect little gem of a fic. Lovely.

[pixiechan]

Thank you! I'm always quite nervous I'm going to cross the line into saccharine if i'm not careful.

[konishi_zen]

Oh I agree. But this one was very subtle and kept the balance well. Lots of love! (finally got the Penny Lane reference...he he he)