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May 19, 2006 15:58

I was writing a Bella-centric fic. I was. I swear. And then I got bunnied by my own comment over at SCUSA. Padmoon must be as addicted to me as I am to it, because it refuses to relinquish me even for the time it takes to write one Bella-centric.

The Best Laid Plans (HP; R/S; 5,515 words; PG-13 for language and implication, I suppose.)

( And they’ve already heard my rendition of 'Penny Lane,' remember I sang it on the platform fourth year, so it's not like they can be any more horrified by me then they already are. )

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sam_can_do_it May 20 2006, 14:56:46 UTC

This was beautiful! The parental reactions are very realistic and Sirius and Remus both responded wonderfully!

pixiechan May 20 2006, 18:32:32 UTC

Thankyooooou!
(PS your icon makes me giggle so.)

sam_can_do_it May 21 2006, 02:31:13 UTC

Thanks, it's the only good icon I've ever made. It's from a quote in a fic I wrote!

pixiechan May 21 2006, 13:57:17 UTC

Cute.

thedeathchamber May 21 2006, 00:20:45 UTC

Adorable....!!!

pixiechan May 23 2006, 12:34:24 UTC

Hahha, I try. Thanks. <3

anonymous May 21 2006, 22:58:04 UTC

Oh, this is just lovely! You capture all of the awkwardness of coming out and in-law relationships wonderfully, but I like best of all your descriptions of Remus and Sirius together, which are just heart-meltingly cute, without being unrealistic. Yay! Thanks for writing such a sweet story -- Sirius in particular just kills me!

eloiselovelace May 21 2006, 22:58:38 UTC

pixiechan May 23 2006, 12:35:12 UTC

Hee, thank you so much! I really, really love writing Sirius, so I'm glad you enjoy him!

eloiselovelace May 23 2006, 13:44:24 UTC

It shows (that you love writing Sirius). Anyway, you're very welcome, and I look forward to reading more from you!

morriganscrow May 22 2006, 23:41:16 UTC

Beautiful work! Their voices are so true, you don't strike a single off note in the whole piece. The interaction with the Lupins is perfect, and I know, having helped my foster-son cope with coming out and the aftermath of that.
I too will place this in memories, it's worth it!

pixiechan May 23 2006, 12:36:02 UTC

Aww, thank you! *totally pretends she is not keeping a tally-list of how many times her stuff gets memory'd, muahahaha.*

eloiselovelace May 23 2006, 13:49:59 UTC

Being nosey, I can't quite make out who the third "their love IS canon" quote couple is.

S/R, D/H, then who?

If you don't tell me, then I'll just keep assuming it's Ginny/Voldemort or something. (No nose, no hair...)

pixiechan May 23 2006, 20:40:46 UTC

Hahaha, it's James/Lily, actually. XD

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