Comments | plane_sects: fic: Tom Cruise Must Die (4/??) (KB, JD, JJ, KH, others)

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fic: Tom Cruise Must Die (4/??) (KB, JD, JJ, KH, others)

Jul 21, 2006 21:25

Title: Tom Cruise Must Die (4/?)
Cast: Kristen Bell. Jason Dohring. Joshua Jackson. With sundry guest stars of the CW and Scientology variety!
Authors: buffyx & missdeviant
Rating: NC-17 (this section PG-13)
Notes/Warnings: Rule number one of VM RPS: Do not talk about VM RPS. Not to the actors, anyway. It's just not cool, and DEFINITELY NOT AT ALL FUNNY, OKAY? OKAY ( Read more... )

fic: tom cruise must die

Comments 83

sadiekate July 22 2006, 04:36:13 UTC

OKAY. I HAVE NOT ACTUALLY READ MORE THAN ABOUT A HUNDRED WORDS SO FAR. HOWEVER.

"I don't know. But pancakes..." He trails off. "Waffles are clearly the superior food. They have the, you know, grid design that allows syrup to be distributed evenly."

I just read that part, and died laughing. For see, in a fic I am cowriting with rachel_shanz, the section I wrote this morning has the two main characters engaging in the waffle/pancake debate. That is how much you crazy wenches inspire me.

Okay, back to my regular scheduled reading.

buffyx July 26 2006, 17:04:03 UTC

Bitch, please! I AM THE ONE WHO STARTED THE GREAT DEBATE!!! :-P

Oh man. THE BREAKFAST FOOD WARS ARE FAR FROM OVER!!

call_me_cash July 22 2006, 04:55:12 UTC

Making out in the snow? Kidnapped alien baby? Pancakes?! This chapter was awesome!

buffyx July 26 2006, 17:29:27 UTC

Thank you!! :)

treatyoself July 22 2006, 05:05:55 UTC

Loved this section. Sounds cheesy, but it was almost magical - a lot of your descriptions and all the snow and such. I especially liked the "bruised-colored sky." Really fantastic visual there.

And the kissing? In the snow? All that toe-curling business? Definitely gave me goosebumps. You know, the I-need-to-get-me-some-of-THAT kind.

Keep it comin', ladies! We love you!

PS: Is it weird that now whenever I just see "Jason Dohring" written in your story, I think it's a typo of some kind and that "Fucking" should always be in the middle? Ahaha.

buffyx July 26 2006, 17:31:42 UTC

Awww! Thank you. I wrote most of the Michigan scenery stuff, since I live here and all.

PS: Is it weird that now whenever I just see "Jason Dohring" written in your story, I think it's a typo of some kind and that "Fucking" should always be in the middle? Ahaha.

Hahahahahahahaha! I KNOW, RIGHT????????

Thanks for commenting!!

noblealice July 22 2006, 05:09:59 UTC

So I had a whole bunch of things to mention but I forgot all of them once I got to the kissing. That was amazing. And steamy. But it was all eclipsed by this: “Yes. No.” He breathes out, a little shaky, before looking over at her. “Honestly? More of a… been-wanting-to-do-that-for-months kind of thing. But, um. Not exactly planned or whatever.” Because an unsure Jason admitting that he has feelings for Kristin is just hot.

...

Okay, I think my brain has come back...somewhat. Anyways, I LOVED the skating scene because I've always had a little fantasy of skating with Josh and I adored the references to the guy's childhood movies.

I almost spit out my drink when I read this: "THE BABY'S VOTE DOES NOT COUNT. SHE CANNOT EVEN FIND HER NOSE!" Josh yells playfully.
That was hilarious! I love Josh being a stand-in parent.

OMG Baby kidnappings?? ACK!

buffyx July 27 2006, 17:33:23 UTC

Because an unsure Jason admitting that he has feelings for Kristin is just hot.

RIGHT??????

And how could we NOT have Josh ice skating? The Mighty Ducks jokes were just too easy.

Thanks for feedbacking!!

silverstars July 22 2006, 05:30:05 UTC

“Payback’s a bitch, Mighty Duck.”

That line rocks so, so hard.

buffyx July 27 2006, 17:39:12 UTC

Heeee! ::takes a bow:: Thank you!!