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[moonishlips]

black dog (gon' make you sweat, gon' make you burn)
one-shot | high-school-au, jaesu, bullying. angst, friendship/bromance; PG-13. (1144 Words.)
mild inspiration from the song black dog by led zeppelin, but not enough to actual be relevant. (yes i turned an otherwise upbeat-and-non-miserable-song-miserable. what.)
warning for implied gore and a

Comments

[moonishlips]

spot for scarletpeonies because she requested it, even though this isn't what i was talking about when we discussed it. either way, spot! :D

[moonishlips]

I just appreciate that it didn't happen okay 8|||

[weerainbow]

oh sweetie...I'm almost at a loss for words after that!
You always create such strong atmosphere with your writing, and in this it's like there's a blanket of oppression over the two of them that they can't get out from under and I feel a little exhausted from being in their world...but that's a good thing because I love how you draw me right in there!
But oh it's so so sad.
No, I don't think sad really explains. More like heartwrenching. Because of the desperatation that's there. I wish that I could have saved them from it all.
Yet the sadness isn't all that's there. I loved the way that Angles (I loved that nickname for Jaejoong) sought out Junsu and how he clung to him right from the start. He needed someone, and Junsu did what he could but he was just not enough...he couldn't do enough...I'm rambling I know but I'm still a little dizzy from reading ♥

[moonishlips]

Thank you so much babe~ I love when you comment because you're always so indepth. And it's nice to read :D :D :D

Asafg I love the name Angles. I think that's such a great nickname. And paired with Jaejoong I think it kind of just worked. ♥

[fallen_reya]

well, I can't say I didn't like it, because I surely enjoyed every bit of it, but I find myself in a mild confusion as who is Angles... is he Jaejoong's alter-ego or something?

[moonishlips]

Angles is what Junsu calls Jaejoong :) Nickname, I guess.

[jaeluvsme]

Hurr can't read it now. Damn physiology messing with my life. Saving my spot first.

[su_milk_jun]

i can't read now, but i want my spot.

[su_milk_jun]

You killed them both T_T
Maybe they'll meet in the afterlife and find some comfort there. I love the way you write.

[moonishlips]

That's an adorable prospect. I hope so ; u ;
Thanks so much dear! I'm glad you liked it.