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[moonishlips]

black dog (gon' make you sweat, gon' make you burn)
one-shot | high-school-au, jaesu, bullying. angst, friendship/bromance; PG-13. (1144 Words.)
mild inspiration from the song black dog by led zeppelin, but not enough to actual be relevant. (yes i turned an otherwise upbeat-and-non-miserable-song-miserable. what.)
warning for implied gore and a

Comments

[natipooh]

I'm utterly confused. Is this about Jaejoong being bullied, asking Junsu for help and Junsu, instead of helping JJ, just kills him?

was that it? I think it's not, since that would be horrible and pointless but I thought maybe I didn't understand.

[moonishlips]

Um, it's debateable, I guess. In my mind I had set it out like Jaejoong is bullied, asks Junsu for help, and the most merciful thing Junsu thinks to do is to kill him. But I kind of just left it opened because I didn't want a very closed ending. So, there's that. Heh. ^^"

Thanks so much for commenting~

[moonishlips]

Thanks so much for commentingggggg~ I always hated it in high school when kids would be pushed around in the exact same place everyday, and no one seemed to do anything about it. It was like, dude. :|||

I'm realizing I could have been more concise with the last little bit of this, but I like it so I'm just going to leave it. Whoops-oops. Glad to give you some Jaesu, though, even though it's kind of miserable. ♥♥

[moonishlips]

YAH YOU WERE SITTING RIGHT NEXT TO ME WHEN I WROTE THIS HER HER HER

Ye-ah. This is different than you expected, and I knew you had kind of a different idea in mind, so I thought I'd see what you think :) guess it's good? huh.

it kind of fits with the song too, because the instrumentals of the song are abrupt as well.
this. but as a stand alone story, it does seem kind of strange. But I like it in correlation to the song, so I left it.

YAY YOU COMMENTED DANCES \:D/