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[plasmaslinger]

these breezie daies, these thumping cloud daies,
all you trees don’t look so hot to me no more
you used to explode and
now youre blasted and cracked what
would god say to that if you told
him what happened to me
where did you go o angels
youre looking like airplanes

don’t think you can hide
you dark seamy people
the rain isn’t there for

Comments

[chocolatexeyes]

if it's any consolation *sp* (<---i think that's the right word lol) I read it too...damnit it's too early to be up...i hate school!!! lata

~*M*~

[dfinetenacious]

i do

[inside_voices]

You might not attract the readers you want anymore, but people read it. Win some, you lose some. Looks like your script is finalizing in the production stages, I can't wait to see it.

[___starslight]

i read it, & i like this one very much.

[aqhart]

what you steping o' sumtin? i's a full fledged ryan-fanboy, back from the beginning. i'm talking roots man. pure blood. representing fo' life.
(random gang sign you don't recognize)

word.