I've never played ANYONE like Platinum before! If you have any crit for me, then please let me know so I can improve!

As a note:
Luna speaks in the normal font.
Sena speaks in a blue font.I will do my best to make sure you're aware there are two people speaking at once! If you get confused or have questions, please don't hesistate to contact me! ( Read more... )

[It was an early morning at the bakery, nobody was there and it was still locked up for the night. In the kitchen at the back was a huge cake fit for a massive party, a good 3ft tall at least. But the strangest thing of all was that the cake was wobbling, shuffling even. That was until a girl burst out of the top, gasping for air.]

Who the hell ( Read more... )

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