A minute - H/G Story for the Passage of Time Challenge

[pluschi]

A minute - H/G Story for the Passage of Time Challenge
Title: A minute
Word count: 855
Rating: G
Summary: Harry finds Ginny at the lake, a few days after the final battle.
A/N: I'm afraid this is unbeta’d! All comments and concrit are welcome, please feel tree to lend a helping hand *g*.  Written for the Passage of Time Challenge at

Comments

[almond_joyz]

Oh this is very lovely. I like the little intimate moment between the two of them and the way you convey their feelings.

[pluschi]

Thanks you very much for commenting *g*
I'm glad you liked it!

[almond_joyz]

you're very welcome

[pluschi]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked the characterizations...I find it somewhat difficult to guess at what Harry and Ginny would be like after the war (because JKR never showed us) but I'd like to think it's something like this. A Harry that's a bit more mature and somehow steadier and Ginny who's still strong but also shaken.
Your comment really soothed my insecurities about the characterization so thanks a lot :)

[mhersheybar]

Ahh, wonderful. A really good balance in their emotions and behavior.

[pluschi]

Thank you and thanks for commenting :-)

[ginevrawp]

Loved it! It felt so intimate and simple and H/G! And I loved the imagery you used in the first two paragraphs, beautifully descriptive and in just the right amount. :)

[pluschi]

Thanks for the lovely words. It took me a long time to write the first two paragraphs - I couldn't get it right. It was either too short or too long but I finally decided on this :-) Glad you liked it and thanks for dropping in!

[rumpelsnorcack]

I had a comment all written and my computer ate it *kicks computer* so I'll try again.

I loved it. I loved how you were able to capture the two of them so well in so few words. It felt intimate and just right for them.

[pluschi]

Oh thank you *g*. It's a bit compliment for me to hear that I can capture them so well in so few words because usually I take way too many words to say things. So wauw, thank you for that :)

[rumpelsnorcack]

You're welcome. I understand the 'too many' words thing. My fics generally tend to mushroom out of all recognition too. Keeping things short is a real challenge for me :)