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spae July 27 2008, 13:22:30 UTC
very nice! liked the resolution lots.

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pocketfullof July 27 2008, 13:55:36 UTC
Thank you! :D

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prairie_grass July 27 2008, 13:40:21 UTC
Adorable! Totally adorable!

Also, the sex scene, with the camera, was INTENSE and AWESOME.

yey!

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pocketfullof July 27 2008, 13:56:10 UTC
Heee! Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it (and that you liked the sec scene - I hate writing sex scenes).

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prairie_grass July 27 2008, 13:58:50 UTC
haha, I don't know any writer who doesn't hate sex scenes! I'm sitting here right now thinking, 'how do I make this scene hotter, it's needs to be hotter and longer, dammit!!!' but I find you very rarely read something and go, "Oh, psh, LAME sex-scene!"

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garvaldmains July 27 2008, 13:41:04 UTC
totally brilliant hun!

*hugs* dix

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pocketfullof July 27 2008, 13:56:32 UTC
*beams* Thank you!

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pocketfullof July 27 2008, 13:57:05 UTC
Aw, thank you so so much! I'm so pleased you liked it. :D :D

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readerj July 27 2008, 13:52:48 UTC
An awesome story and a really enjoyable read.

Warm, easy conversation and a great spark between the boys.

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pocketfullof July 27 2008, 13:57:44 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you thought the conversations were warm and easy, as that was very much what I was trying for!

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