Tyrant fanfic: Unbalanced

[pofika]

Acknowledgement: The characters found in this story (Tatsumi Souichi and Morinaga Tetsuhiro) are the sole property of Takanaga Hinako; I just played with them, a little.
Title: Unbalanced
Author: pofika
Warnings: Sexual situation, some bad language.
Word count: 2,421
Note: Oneshot, KSB Fanfic, contest entry; built around the three words “temperance,

Comments

[soniahikari]

very beautiful!!!! i really love it XD souichi it's so cute !!!!!!!!!! good work!!!!

[pofika]

Thank you. I'm happy you liked it.

[wawa09]

Oh great, great, great!
I love it !

I was looking soooo forward to read you again !
your style is great, you understand the characters very well !
PPPlllleeeaase write more and more stories !

xoxo

ps: sorry for my english, it's my second language too

[mihaelitka]

Very good, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this :D

[pofika]

It's good to know you did, thank you.

[pofika]

This is a reply to wawa09. For some reason LJ don't place it under wawa09's comment.

I am writing another story, still a long way to go, 2/3 written.
I got an idea for this contest (I was a bit too brave to enter, but hey, I loved writing it and hoped others might like reading it).
Thanks for letting me know you are one who did :-)

[paulagay]

That was fun! I really enjoy your writing; both of them were so cute!

[pofika]

Thanks for taking the time to comment, and your lovely words.

[dokorotan]

it was soooo good!!!! I really love such cute Souichi XD Really beautiful work!!!!!

[pofika]

I’m happy that you liked it so much, and thanks for letting me know.

[seichirou]

It's a lovely story! Thank you!

[pofika]

Thank you for commenting :-)

[yaoilovefan]

For a moment there I was afraid you'll make Souichi endure rape. >.< But the idea of the dream was great! You wrote a really nice situation with the dream and Tetsuhiro's waking up Senpai with the blow job. I really enjoyed the part.
Nice work.

[pofika]

Well, I didn’t hint anything in my note, because I wanted the dream an element of a surprise. I didn’t think about it, but maybe some people turned off afraid/repulsed by what is happening in the story and stopped reading there. It’s good that you read further to know there was no rape :-)

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it and for commenting.
It means a lot.

[yaoilovefan]

I can endure rape fics. They are not problematic to read for me. Those with character death are a vast problem. I try to avoid them if I can unless someone recommends a fic like that to me. Then I try it even knowing how it will end.

I'm happy I managed to read your fic before the end of the voting. XD

[pofika]

Death is part of the natural cycle, but it is sad, and the older I get the more I like the book I read (or fanfic) ending on a happy tune.
I don’t mind a little angst if happiness follows to balance it out.
So, I really hope that your BLaT won’t end in angst ;-)

I forgot to mention before, that it was a good idea to show your inspiration for hell hound and to include the link to it creator’s web site!