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Fic: [Arashi] the scent of the sea

Nov 13, 2011 05:10

Title: the scent of the sea
Characters/Pairing: Nino/Ohno
Word Count/Rating: ~1150, PG
Summary: Nino is afraid of the sea. Nino is afraid of Ohno.
Notes: it's 5 am you guys holy shit. where did this come from. probably the deep well of nino's odd psyche.

( Nino is afraid of the sea. It crashes in on itself with deep walloping power, it erases itself over and over, it's this deep unmanageable thing of secrets in the darkness. )

--arashi, -pg, ohno/nino

Comments 22

neenashareefa November 13 2011, 14:17:09 UTC

♥●•٠·˙˙·٠•●♥ thissss... Thank you for sharing ^_^

floweranza November 13 2011, 15:44:45 UTC

Thanks for reading!

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secretwish109 November 13 2011, 14:52:08 UTC

this is lovely! :D
i really love it the way you wrote about nino's feeling! thank you so much!

floweranza November 13 2011, 15:45:14 UTC

Nino's head is pretty difficult to get into. *A* Thanks for reading!

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floweranza November 13 2011, 15:46:36 UTC

Thanks! Haha, I was actually in bed when the thought came into my head that, hey, Nino doesn't like the sea, but he likes Ohno, although Ohno is like the sea, so ??? And then I had to write how Ohno breaks all the different ways Nino wants order. :D

Thanks for reading!

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phrenk November 13 2011, 15:42:44 UTC

This is an interesting Nino POV and an interesting view of Ohno from it. I enjoyed reading it, and it made me think. :D My favorite part was about Ohno's dancing. ♥ Thank you for sharing!

floweranza November 13 2011, 15:49:31 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, it's definitely a bit weird, and I'm glad it made you think! In my head, Ohno is both Nino's comfort zone and yet at the same time, the exact opposite. XD;;

Thanks for reading!

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floweranza November 14 2011, 01:54:15 UTC

My brain works weirdly at 5AM!

Thanks for reading. :D

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