[Fic] Hikari (AoixUruha ver.)

[pokky4ever]

Title: Hikari
Chapter: 2/2
Author: Pokky
Pairing: AoixUruha
Genre: Slice of life, romance, tragedy
Rating: PG-15
Warning: Incest, shota, read at own risks
Summary: "My brother told me "I love you" when I was 8 years old." [Continuation]

First part  <<<<------------------

Notes: Before reading, do know that Uruha is 12, Aoi is 19 and Hana is 15.

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6th

Comments

[peachysuju]

T_T This is really beautiful... I'm glad you restart to kill people and the way you did this time was flawless, but poor Aoi. (r.i.p T_T) I wasn't expecting a tragic end like this one...

Thanks for this sad story

[pokky4ever]

LOL haha.... wow, I think you're the first reader to ever be happy that I restart to kill either Aoi or Uruha! xD ... yeah, normally, readers are like "please make them live! D="...

but yeah, I'm restarting to take back my old habits and to write more than usual, so it's a good thing! Thanks for the support, Peachy!

[forever_by_me]

*_* that's so sad.....
I feel so down... Uru-chan thought Aoi- nii's still in his room.... :'(
how sad!!! Aoi-nii's dead!! *cries for hours*
a really *sniff* good-writing *sniff* story!
keep on writing like this.
:)

[pokky4ever]

You know the scene where Uruha's sure that Aoi was still at home, I actually got very teary writing it and imagining it in my head! xD But I'm really glad you're supporting me to keep on writing like this! =D

Thank you for reading and for the comment!

[strangled_kun]

I'd been wondering when you'd conclude this story. I'm glad to read the last part of it. It was short, but needless to say that it fit your descriptive point of view.
I'm taken by the part where Aoi comes to visit Uruha a last time. A farewell between them, it's touching. And i'm disappointed to see so little comments for you. I'm still wondering how people decide to comment? You get what I'm inquiring, yeah?

[pokky4ever]

I'm very grateful that you're still a loyal reader... I have been up to practically nothing, but you're still very supportive of my writing. It touches me that you're always honest in your comments. ^-^ I appreciate it. I'm also sorry that your fic is taking forever to finish... It's just that it's kind of hard to write, since I really don't want to disappoint you.