Comments | pokokihcikisik: i just need opinions :/

towelettepower in pokokihcikisik

i just need opinions :/

May 01, 2012 19:32

title: tba idk tbh
pairing: onho (obviously)
rating: tba (pg for now, i guess lol)
summary: basically, it's just minho saving onew from human trafficking

( um click here? )

rating: pg, pairing: onew/minho, !draft, fandom: shinee

Comments 15

towelettepower May 2 2012, 01:35:31 UTC

pointless spot for hyung ???

yapikao May 2 2012, 04:09:06 UTC

IT IS NEVER POINTLESS! yapikao I got excited thinking you had written more ;__; did you see my comment in gdocs lol?

I also agree with everything in the comment below!

BUT GO AND WRITE MOREEEEEE. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. GO. WRITE. MORE. GO. WRITE. MORE!!!!!

There are some typos but they can be fixed later. For now :D JUST KEEP ON WRITING PLEASE? *gets on hands and knees and begs you* I'll do almost anything for you ;__; *grovels*

BASICALLY IF YOU DO NOT CONTINUE THIS :@ I WILL TORTURE YOU *CRACKS WHIP* SO GO AND WRITE, RIGHT NOW!!!!
♥

you know I love you :D

towelettepower May 2 2012, 06:16:33 UTC

no i didn't cos i'm a LAZY BUM. yes i did see it!!!

blah i told you before but it seems like you forgot ;/

SIGH IDK BUT I'LL TRY AND IF I FAIL I FAIL ;c

i love you too hyung ♥

yapikao May 2 2012, 08:28:55 UTC

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:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

:/ Was that a long time ago? I'm sorry :/ I didn't realise it was _this_ fic. I'm slow/stupid something. D:

I WILL HOLD YOUR HAND ALLLLLL THROUGH THE PROCESS :D

:c i love you too ;__; ♥ *cuddles* hwaiting~

mintyfresh1 May 2 2012, 01:36:52 UTC

I DEMAND. THAT YOU CONTINUE.
RIGHT THIS SECOND.

mintyfresh1 May 2 2012, 01:43:41 UTC

YOU FUCKING LEFT IT
NOT EVEN WITH A PERIOD
BUT WITH A FUCKING COMMA
I AM APPALLED.
BY THIS.
oppaaaaa

towelettepower May 2 2012, 04:36:22 UTC

well fuck.

i forgot the period. it was meant to be a period but my fingers fucked up. (AGAIN))))

onhos May 2 2012, 01:43:52 UTC

I skimmed through it since I'm studying
but it's good baby ^^
you should continue it <3333

towelettepower May 2 2012, 04:47:24 UTC

aw, i'm sorry that interrupted your study time ;~~~;

but sob thanks bb ily

onhoing May 2 2012, 02:49:15 UTC

HEAVEN YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THIS FIC /le nods/
It's really good. Umm and I know I'm in no place to say this (cos I'm still struggling with how I write), but yours has improved greatly :3

sigh. i've been craving for an onho fic with this plot for a long time tbqh ;__;

towelettepower May 2 2012, 06:14:43 UTC

SOB JUDY OMG YOU HAVE ANOTHER ACCT! OMG I MISS YOU

crey, i'm incredibly happy to hear that ;~~; i'm glad somebody noticed sob

(it's okai, i'm still kind of struggling with my writing now too)

ah me too that's why i started this! :D

onhoing May 2 2012, 07:52:39 UTC

I DID xD I'VE FINALLY FOUND THE BEST USERNAME, TOO.
I MISS YOU TOO T^T

yes ;AA; i'm excited about this!

amatsukishi May 2 2012, 12:06:44 UTC

Please continue on this one.
fluff or angst are you getting into this fic?

given with the idea you had there, it can sprung to any genre you wish to come up with ^_^
well building up and making the plot on a story is really frustrating and brain wrecking but I
say please do continue on this one xd

im encouraging you coz I love Minew and definitely will read this one if ever you formulated
the chapters on this xd

keep up the spirit ok? get on ur muse and write it palle? keke XD