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[pollyfarrah]

Here's the story of a girl, it isn't one of us, but watch out. It could be

Comments

[onlyinlexington]

Dumb question but you wrote that right? Wow. They look like pieces of lyrics somehow joined together. And I think it's about you.
:O

[pollyfarrah]

I did. And it seems like that a little to me too, the lyrics thing that is. And it really isn't. Its a little about everyone + imagination.

[rasberymunchkin]

I was hearing a broken little tune to it. It really did have an odd kind of meter, but it really worked. I love the mood you set in your writing, drives the reader on.

[pollyfarrah]

Thankies Jess-ay :DD

[swizzlesticks99]

powerful. i liked it...sad, but related to everything in everyone's life somehow...
almost like anyone who read it could think it was about them, with some tweaks. personal.
it was like a poem.

[pollyfarrah]

Thank you. That's what I was going for. It IS about everyone.

[forgetme_not_]

it sounds like the girl in your story is hurting, and i hope one day she's happy again. but while she is hurting, she shouldn't forget about her closest friends. *hugs* we're here mos[berg], for now and forever.

[pollyfarrah]

Delta, the story isn't about me. Did you get that? Not. About. Me. And I'm fine, by the way. I'm happy :P And as for her friends...yeah...

[diduknowthat]

hm?

[pollyfarrah]

Hm?

[diduknowthat]

2 words...holy crap. That was a really long story for lj. Yes i agree it did sound like lyrics and it had alot of cliches in but it was really good.

[pollyfarrah]

Thanks :)

[troublemaiker1]

wow, so powerfull
i agree with what everone said, but i get that its not about you.

[pollyfarrah]

Thanks