HMD: How's My Driving?

Nov 25, 2011 00:45

H.M.D.?!
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diastereomer November 25 2011, 07:13:55 UTC
Player name: Kat

Characters played: Yusuf :: INCEPTION :: diastereomer

Personal concrit link: He can take a hit.

Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Of course it's allowed! I don't know why they would be necessarily encouraged more than any other form of contact... Yusuf is hardly a scary person, and I'm about as tough as butter at room temperature but... SURE, ANON ENCOURAGED(?)

Other comments? If something seems off about Yusuf, please don't hesitate to tell me.

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faroffdream November 25 2011, 09:53:47 UTC
;_; Your Yusuf is just u9eijtksfdl gifs and emotes fail me words fail me ahhh I love him so. I like the humor you weave in with his snappy intelligence but also this kind of laid backness that I THINK A LOT of people often confuse [in the fandom rly] for something closer to laziness or whatever which I believe is untrue. I like that Yusuf has his own BRAND and shape of sharpness and that he seems to read very clearly not just for the sake of his voice in terms of accent and word choice but also the implication of someone who's got a philosophy [whatever it is] and won't be taking any of eames' anyone's sass. 8] or he'll retort appropriately. UM IDK I WISH I COULD BE MORE SPECIFIC LMFAO but uh I just....he's really fun to read and his back-and-forth with Eames is just Yes-More-Please it feels very organic or maybe the word I want is um BELIEVABLE and implicit of history you know whatever predated the Fischer job enlistment basically and I love that. I really do.

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greding November 25 2011, 17:56:58 UTC
I have not too much useful crit to give but Yusuf is adorable and hilarious. I love how you took a fairly minor character and made him so fleshed out and believable. I love the Inception cast at poly and stalk the shit out of everything you do. :-D

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orangetoughguy November 26 2011, 03:20:37 UTC
HI KAT HI. I haven't been able to tag Yusuf a lot recently but I still like reading what he has to say for himself in posts and what he has to say to other characters |D He's intelligent and smart-mouthed when he wants to be but without a snarky tone. I honestly feel like that moment of him flipping the bird while driving the van and laughing is most IC and I get that out of your Yusuf when I see him in play. I also really enjoy seeing the role he's taken up with his Inception 'family' ;-; Brosufs mamasufs and all. You've managed to flesh him out beyond what we get in the movie in an engaging and believable way.

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7thborn November 27 2011, 15:55:46 UTC
I NEED TO TAG THIS GUY MORE. No, seriously. I stalk him insanely and I enjoyed that one thread we did (or... two? sob idk too early in the morning) and I really, really want to continue writing Ginny off of him because he is fabulous. There's a great spark of humour to him mingled with that sharp intelligence that a man of his profession ought to have, as well as this easiness and almost laissez faire attitude about everything that is so curious and wonderful to read. And given how he doesn't get nearly as much screen time in the film, I think it is absolutely incredible how you've taken every second of what we are given and explored him as a character, went deeper (we have to go deeper), fleshed him out into this man who reads as so real and quirky and - well, I love it. And you. Also, yes, you. <3333

Anyway, YES, you do him such fantastic justice and I would love to thread with him more. Especially about cats. Because, I mean, look. Ginny just got a kitten. They can bond or something. 8|

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