The Lady-stache

Sep 28, 2010 21:13

The Lady-stache

Title: The Lady-stache
Author: PonyATF
Pairing: JonghyunxKey, ninja!Ontae
Genre: A rainy-angsty romance, au
Rating: R (cursing, use of alcohol, implied sex)
Disclaimer: I neither own the boys, nor do I make any money with this story.
Summary: Kibum is a photographer in his late twenties. By accident he sees his ex again, the one man, he ( Read more... )

pairing: ontae, pairing: jongkey, shinee, media: fanfiction

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jjongjjang September 28 2010, 20:11:13 UTC
HAHA

SPOT.

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ponyatf September 28 2010, 20:14:38 UTC
Enjoy my dear... as much as this rainy angst is enjoyable, kekeke

<3

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jjongjjang September 28 2010, 20:53:31 UTC
First of all, LOL @ Jjong and lady-with-mustache. xD

I liked this! The italic parts when Key is taking the mental photographs is a really nice touch to the story. Not to mention the way you describe things is gorgeous. :D Jinki calling Taem 'hummingbird' was soooo sweet. And I love Minho being the comforter guy. Really suits him lol

GREAT WORK BB.
<333

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ponyatf September 28 2010, 21:09:08 UTC
Kekeke, right? WHAT WAS HE THINKING?!

To be honest, I do the same. I have lots of mental images burned into my mind, kekeke.
'Hummingbird' would totally be my nickname for Tae... the way he dances or how he gets excited, kekeke, I dunno, it seems fitting (^-^)
Awe, I am so glad u liked, bb ~ <33333333

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eonjekkaji September 28 2010, 21:04:56 UTC
the mental images were definitely my favourite, just all sorts of amazing and flawlessness &hearts BUT WAE LADY STACHE ;-; i weep for you jjong but this was a lovely fic /memmms

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ponyatf September 28 2010, 21:13:56 UTC
Omo, thanks for the compliment and for meming! <3

I am not sure myself, why the lady has a stache... Jjongie saw something in her, got tempted by her and maybe to make sure from the beginning, that it wasn't her beauty, that broke the Jongkey apart it needed something like a lady-stache...

*nudges Jjongie's head to make sure, he never leaves Key again*

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adynka September 28 2010, 21:09:28 UTC
you don't have words??! what about me?! omg! i've just .. died in awe... ♥
:) you hit my taste with this whole idea like no tomorrow, seriously :D

sorry for taking time, but i'm quite out of .. lots of things, mind probably? :D lol

wow~

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ponyatf September 28 2010, 21:19:48 UTC
Awe bb... U make me... make me... AAAAAAWE!!!
(Kekeke, so that is how a convo between two speechless people sounds like?!)

Okay, I try again:

I am glad I hit ur taste, kekeke. And it was a lot of fun to write this.
My own wordloss is more over the amount of things happening around my and my old and slowly becoming boring song about just not having enough time... I NEED MORE TIME DAMNIT! Kekeke

But as I see, it is the same for u?! (^0^)

Muchos muchos lovos for u bb... and yet again I have to say: UR ICON IS PURE LOVE!!

Key with glasses simply kills me... too beautiful!!!

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adynka September 28 2010, 21:35:03 UTC
in fact i'm hella wondering, why it's still as pretty coherent as it is. lol nevermind :3
it's amazing and i love Key being a photographer... and the mention of lady -stache was soo beautifully weird :D
oh~ and recently i've got fond of gray.. maybe 'cause of endless raining.. whatever :)

time .. time.. one more time .. it's just that i want to/have to make so many things within a day, so i feel lazy right after i wake up... damn! :D :D :3

sure it is!! ♥ it's Jongkey bb!! :D and this snapshot is the perfection ... :3 ♥~

his smile bb, the smile is a gun! :O yeah~

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ponyatf September 28 2010, 21:49:52 UTC
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAA, true true... It might be, that we have a special hidden talent for that (^0^)

Ah yes, me likez the gray as well... but the raining is really enough allready, kekeke. I have the habit of taking long and pointless walks in the rain, so no wonder I am almost always sick with the sniffles or the flu, kekeke
*iz coughing like crazy at the moment*

Kekekeke, same here! But if I keep lying my mind starts running over everything that still needs to be done and... TT__TT no more relaxing lazyness for me...

PERFECTION IT IS INDEED!!!

Yes yes... and Jjongie hiding his wonderful wonderful wonderful mouth behind his hand is sooooo alluring. WE KNOW WHAT U ARE HIDING THERE AND WE WANT THAT!

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ponyatf September 28 2010, 21:53:50 UTC
YAY! My gurklchen!
Kekeke, well, not longer than one roadtrip-chap, I guess... Maybe even shorter!

Awe, yes yes, I also pity myself for having to wait for that FANLETTER FIC! Kekeke, there will be a big party in my room on the day u're going to post it!
(Omo, I so can picture Key nagging and screaming in fear, Jjongie putting in a sugar-hill gang tape and noding to the beat and of course a smutty end on the back seat, forgotten all the urge to LEARN something... unless it is something dirty, kekeke)

Me and the fic will wait patiently for ur return, my dear!

<33333333333333333333333333

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jongkeylove17 September 28 2010, 22:24:46 UTC
unnie!!!~ its soo beautiful... the mental images had me a bit confused, but i got it... i thought at first that key was taking actual pictures... kekekek... then thought that would be pretty weird... keke... always another beautiful fic!!!~

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ponyatf September 29 2010, 00:05:00 UTC
Awe, thanky thanks dongsaengie!!

Kekeke, yeah, I feared they might be confusing... But I am glad u got it eventually (^-^)

~ Thanks for ur beautiful comment dear!

<3333333333333

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