Into the Night (FINAL CHAPTER)

Sep 12, 2011 02:21

Into the Night
Author : Pooobaihr
Beta: shullieq
Chapters: 10B (FINAL) / 10 + Epilogue
Pairings :  Uruha/Kai (onesided), Kai/OFC, Ruki/Reita , Aoi/Uruha/Kai
Band: the GazettE,
Guests: Dir en grey, Aki (SID) , Tora (Alice Nine)
Genre : AU, Vampires, Horror?, Action (if you squint), smut, slight romance(well..if you squint), Drama
Rating : NC-17
Warnings : The game ( Read more... )

vampires, fanfic

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viciousfaye69 September 12 2011, 08:30:59 UTC
WOW!!!!
I'm speechless!!!
I really hoped that Akira and Yutaka would have found away to get away or to destroy Aoi,Ruki and Uru but all efforts were useless. I seriously got chills at the end when Ruki was dragging Akira away and turning Yutaka into a zombie and having Akira watch as he slowly turned was genius I loved this story and it was worth the wait!!!! I hope you keep writing awesome Vamp fics^^

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pooobaihr September 12 2011, 14:19:11 UTC
Yeah. The betas that I had for this story hoped for the same thing, so you're not alone. When I started out writing this I knew what I wanted for the ending. I had seen wayy too many vampire fics (VK or simply Original stories) ending "happily" and it annoyed the mess out of me, that is why I created this story. :D

Im really happy you enjoyed this and stuck with it even after I took >> months off from writing it. That damn Ruki muse had too many ideas and I had to control him and cut it all down. lol.. Otherwise, this story would have gotten much longer, would have taken longer, all to come to the same outcome. XD Anyways.. Thank you again!

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pooobaihr September 13 2011, 23:02:41 UTC
The epilogue is already done. I am just giving people time to read this before i post it. Another day or so and I will post it.

Thank you!

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pooobaihr September 13 2011, 05:32:46 UTC
Thank you for keeping up with it!
Just a couple more days and then I'll post the epilogue.

I tried to keep the story from becoming cliche. Im sure I probably hit some spots, but I did my best to steer clear of that. The story is definitely not happy. lol.. Not by a long shot. But that is certainly how I wanted it to be. :D Maybe one day I will write a chapter fic like that. But then again, my oneshots have all the happiness, so it might stay like that. lol
Thanks again!

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rechino_reno September 13 2011, 06:24:33 UTC
so intense * shuders*
*speechless*
ahh~ Yutaka turn into Zombie ;_; I hope Ruki didn't kill Reita T_T
great story!!!

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pooobaihr September 13 2011, 23:01:13 UTC
Im glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I may just go through all of the chapters myself and read them all again. So many grammar mistakes and just utter fail in the beginning. But Im happy to have readers that could still understand it and enjoy reading. Thank you again!

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icchatta_ne September 13 2011, 18:16:57 UTC
Before I say anything non-constructive ...

This was beautifully written. I usually listen to music when I read, to intensify the emotions, and I was thinking of Lux Aeterna for this, but I actually didn't even, and I still felt it all. Seriously, it was a very good read.

Now, as for the non-constructive criticism ...

I FUCKING HATE YOU!!! GOD I WAS ON THE VERGE OF CRYING FOR YUTAKA!! The moment in which Yutaka's memories slept away, and he was finally dead, I actually did lose a couple of tears, but that was really cruel, and mean, and and and ... Yutaka!!!

And now I wonder what will happen to Reita, but I still can't get over Yutaka, poor poor poor thing.

Very Good job, looking forward to the epilogue.

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pooobaihr September 13 2011, 22:57:56 UTC
LIES
YOU ENJOYED EVERY LITTLE PIECE OF THIS FIC
YOU ANGST LOVING WHORE!!!

hehehehehheheheh

*coughs*

Anyways.. I am glad you stuck with me through these 2?+ years of writing this story. It sux that, "THAT" happened to where I got blocked.. But Im very happy to have slowly gotten back.
And as always thank you for commenting~

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