Something New (Jon/Ryan)

Dec 31, 2009 16:32

Title: Something New
Recipient: lyo
Author: stealstheashes
Band: The Young Veins
Pairing: Jon/Ryan
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5,000
Summary: Ryan finds out the hard way that marriage to Jon Walker is no joke.
Notes: Thank you to L. for the beta and S. for her encouragement.
Warnings: none

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shinodarely January 1 2010, 02:42:43 UTC
omg i adored them! this this ! they are my favorite! i was so sad for my bb jon, and how protective his chicago boys were ♥

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stealstheashes January 31 2010, 17:26:28 UTC
Thank you so very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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spindlelimbs January 1 2010, 05:16:25 UTC
This is adorable. Tomrad is such an awkward dude but he wants the best for his bff ♥♥♥

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stealstheashes January 31 2010, 17:27:22 UTC
o_o

-a Tomrad's opinion

But seriously, thank you. The Tom parts were some of my favorite to write.

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jae_w January 2 2010, 04:30:28 UTC
This was so great -- I read this when it first came over the wire, before I posted it. I especially love Tom's appearance.

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stealstheashes January 31 2010, 17:28:37 UTC
lol most belated response to comments ever, but I totally flailed irl at your comment. Thank you so much, and I'm glad the Tom parts worked for you especially! And thank you for running this again ♥

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frausorge January 3 2010, 05:36:46 UTC
Ryan's ingenuous bewilderment is beautifully drawn, and oh, his ill-fated but adorable pride in having handled the situation without having to bother Jon! And Jon's crew rallying so firmly around him is great, too.

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stealstheashes January 31 2010, 17:30:13 UTC
I love all comedies of errors and I'm glad it came across well. Thank you so much!

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allegedlykyle January 4 2010, 13:45:41 UTC
I liked this :D Ryan is adorably dense and all ~earnest in trying to settle the issue and Jon is just quiet and sad /: ALSO CREEPILY!STARING TOM WAS AWESOME. I liked how the story progressed smoothly, and you carefully revealed the misunderstanding between Ryan and Jon progressively with each scene.

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stealstheashes January 31 2010, 17:32:09 UTC
:D That is such a great compliment! lol I feel like Tom not staring creepily should be considered a sign that something's seriously wrong. Thank you so much and thank you for reading!

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