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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 4

Oct 11, 2007 09:12

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Pairing: Ennis and Jack
Summary: Ennis and Jack are working as counselors on a children's camp for the summer. Their meeting on the first evening on the camp leads to a friendship neither had expected, ( Read more... )

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big_heart_june October 11 2007, 14:12:35 UTC

But Ennis made no attempt to move. He heard Jack’s breath quicken and then settle into a steady rhythm. Ennis’s eyes focused on Jack’s hair. He wanted to touch it, to stroke it, to tangle his fingers in the black mass and hope it would untangle the confusion in his head.Wow, Christie, that part was so gorgeously sexy. I love how the sexual tension and attraction is slowly building up between them. You've really spoilt us again with this long and lovely update. I was so glad Jack came looking for Ennis after that disastrous double date. :( Cindy gets on my nerves! lol and how sweet of Ennis to buy Jack the beers ( ... )

poppyhoney_67 October 11 2007, 15:06:23 UTC

Hi June and thank you so so much for your lovely comment. Cindy seems to get on everyone's nerves - I wonder why? lol I'm so glad you are enjoying it and thanks so much for reading!

samtyr October 11 2007, 14:43:31 UTC

Oh this is really good. I'm looking forward to reading more about the summer at this camp -- it should be very interesting. Thank you for sharing this.

poppyhoney_67 October 11 2007, 15:06:53 UTC

Hi samtyr, thanks for your comment. I am glad you like it. More soon, hopefully.

lizbird October 11 2007, 14:46:38 UTC

This is really good. I like the date and Ennis not up to making conversation with Meli because he's too interested in Jack. Jack being frustrated because he's under the legal drinking age is a nice touch.

poppyhoney_67 October 11 2007, 15:07:40 UTC

Hi Liz, glad you like it. Can't you just see Jack being mad cos he couldn't drink? I know I could! lol Thanks for your comment.

kmdlrd October 11 2007, 15:32:11 UTC

Ooh I am definitely hooked on this story. Can't wait for more. Thanks. - B

poppyhoney_67 October 11 2007, 19:51:11 UTC

Hello kmdlrd, thanks for your comment. I am glad you enjoyed it.

thelastaerie October 11 2007, 16:09:08 UTC

oh no...i was cheering Ennis on, like "kiss him kiss him kiss him... you're drunk, you can get away with it" LOL...

i love how Jack relished Ennis's touch... awwwww... but seriously, this "role switching" is very intriguing. how clueless can jack twist be? and how "bold" (& drunk) Ennis needs to be to make it happen?

boy, i hate that Cindy, she sounds like a character from Mean Girls or something. I have a feeling that Meli will be the first one to find out about Ennis's attraction to Jack (or both)!

that's a great chapter, Christie!

Eve

poppyhoney_67 October 11 2007, 19:55:22 UTC

Hi Eve, thanks for a lovely comment. Imagine if Ennis knew he had a crowd of over excited girls (me included) screaming "kiss him"!! lol I'm glad you are intrigued by the role switch - watch this space regarding that as I don't want to say too much. What I will say is that there will be a very familiar morning after scene!! Cindy doesn't seem to be too popular around here, I wonder why? And Meli will be around in the next chapter too, let's see if you are right. Thanks for reading.