Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 9

[poppyhoney_67]

Title: Middle of Nowhere

Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.

Thanks: To smilesalot. Thank you, Em, for all your help, you have helped me so much, and I'm so glad you're my beta.

Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.

Author's Note: This chapter

Comments

[riverton44]

Every time you post a new chapter I have to read a few chapters back, pretending that I have to catch up with your story. It's not true - I remember everything - it's just a pleasure of reading it again.
Your story is sooo romantic, full of tenderness and innocence. And Jack & Ennis first night... - it was awesome.
Thanks.

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi riverton44, thanks for you comment! Its nice to know you re-read - I do it because I cant remember what I've written!! Glad you find it romantic, I am a romantic so always want lots of that! Thanks for reading.

[lucerodelalba]

It was so beautiful when they changed t-shirts!
Johanna

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Johanna, so glad you liked the t-shirt exchange, I did too! Thanks for your comment and for reading.

[120cassie]

Hi

Great update. I just love this story.

I love your shy Ennis - I like the way he knows that Jack is what he wants...

More please..

Julie

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Julie, thanks for your comment, so glad you are enjoying the story. I like shy Ennis too, but I want him to be able to tell Jack things, it would drive me crazy otherwise! And yes he knows that he wants Jack. Thanks for reading.

[mariez65]

Hi Christie,

The T-Shirt Swap was brilliant! Lovely moment. I've said it before, but your boys are too adorable for words. You do such a wonderful job of showing us, in a variety of ways, what they're both really feeling and I love that because it fits so well with how guileless these two are. I love the romance and sincerity - your writing is a pleasure to read! Thanks!

Marie

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Marie, thanks for your comment. so glad you liked the t-shirt exchange. I liked that too! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story and their relationship. Thanks for reading!

[thelastaerie]

Squeeee!!!! that's just so sweet and tender, Christie!

“You, er, you want me to do somethin’?” He knew he sounded stupid

omg... Ennis doesn't sound stupid, he sounds just adorable... it's very touching that he cares a lot, almost scared to death that he might have hurt Jack.

And you captured the "ennis in smex" in essence... like how he's shy at first, but when he finally gives in to his desire, he's wild and passionate and erm, slightly out of control :P

And jack asking for Ennis's T-shirt... how could Ennis be so clueless? of course jack wants some part of him with him all the time! awww...

really look forward to Jack's birthday and what Ennis would do... i'm with Jack - i want Jake to spend the whole night with ennis :)

thanks so much for the update :)

Eve

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Eve
Thanks for your comment. Glad it all worked for you. Ennis can be clueless sometimes,he cant believe that Jack wants him so much. I find that adorable! Thanks for reading.