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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 9

Jan 09, 2008 09:56

Title: Middle of Nowhere

Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.

Thanks: To smilesalot. Thank you, Em, for all your help, you have helped me so much, and I'm so glad you're my beta.

Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.

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Comments 89

torry28 January 9 2008, 21:42:46 UTC

I have told you in the beginning how much I loved your writing and I still do and always will.
I love Milli for being a true friend.
Ennis is right about having to be careful.It is always frightening to see what someone would do if their little sanctuary of believing one thing is threatened by someone else's
opposite view. Knowing Ennis' kind heart and shy and quite ways he will do anything to give Jack just what he wished for and more. I'm so looking forward to Jacks birthday and pray nothing stops them from having that perfect day.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story and Em for the beta a truly great teem.
Torry

poppyhoney_67 January 11 2008, 09:46:09 UTC

Hi Torry, thanks so much for your lovely comment, means a lot. Meli is an excellent friend, and she is a friend to us too! It's good that Ennis is so aware of being caught, because Jack's head is in the clouds! Jack's birthday will be in a couple of chapters time. And yes, Em, is a wonderful beta. Thanks for reading!

mel0804 January 9 2008, 23:26:30 UTC

Fantastic story !
I'm so glad to see this update.

poppyhoney_67 January 11 2008, 09:46:34 UTC

Hey Mel, thanks for your comment! glad you like it.

sweetje January 10 2008, 00:47:28 UTC

Very nice chapter. I enjoyed our boys' little rendezvous almost as much as they did. And the exchange of their t-shirts was very romantic. I loved that part.
I love reading this story. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. : )
Debra

poppyhoney_67 January 11 2008, 09:47:10 UTC

Hi Debra, thanks for your comment. Glad you like it, and the t-shirt exchange. I enjoyed writing that very much.

tmn1966 January 10 2008, 00:54:30 UTC

I was just thinking of this story, so I was so glad to see an update to it.

Wonderful! I like the direction Ennis and Jack are going!

Teri

poppyhoney_67 January 11 2008, 09:47:42 UTC

Hi Teri, thanks for your comment, glad you are enjoying the direction they're going in!!

fridayblues January 10 2008, 03:01:53 UTC

Oh my God,
Honestly, I haven't finished reading yet. I reached the part of Ennis licking Jack's nipple and I couldn't go on. I figured I should have let you know that I was practically sweating here. Phew!
Now it's out of my system. I'm going back. LOL
xxx

fridayblues January 10 2008, 03:27:15 UTC

I don't know what to say. This is so nice :) Jack wanted to go somewhere in the middle of nowhere with Ennis on his birthday, and spend the night.
And I love how you have the boys switch T-shirts; the feeling is mutual. It's very meaningful and I hope, through think and thin, they would both keep in mind that they do love each other. *sigh* I totally loved this chapter.
Thanks and I hope they would find a way to be together again soon!
xxx

poppyhoney_67 January 11 2008, 09:48:59 UTC

Hi blues, sorry I nearly caused you stop reading the chapter!!! Glad you managed to finish it. Thanks for such a lovely comment. The t-shirt exchange is very meaningful. It says a lot about both of them and how they feel. Thanks for reading!