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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 13, Part 1

Apr 14, 2008 20:33

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17
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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 13

Jack’s Birthday: Part 1Jack ( Read more... )

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ramona4jake April 14 2008, 21:30:03 UTC

They are going back to camp ? How are they going to spend the night together ? And get drunk ? And.... you know ;-) What has Ennis in his rucksack for Jack ? That spoon he was carving ? Cannot wait for the up-date !
This chapter was beautiful, Ennis taking Jack riding, making one of his dreams come true ! Thank you so much !

poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 14:13:20 UTC

Hey ramona. thanks for your comment. Yes, they're going back to camp, but not for long, don't worry....Ennis has plans and they don't include spending much time on camp! Part 2 will be here soon, I promise...

annabirmingham April 14 2008, 21:31:36 UTC

Yey!! So pleased to see an update of this story! I liked how the boys threw Jack in the water to 'celebrate' his birthday - bet he looked damn fine in just wet boxer shorts!! mmm :)

The horse ride was so romantic, but I'm betting what Ennis has planned for the evening is even better - can't wait for part 2!

Anna x

poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 14:14:04 UTC

Hi Anna, thanks for your comment. I'm really glad you liked it, and yes, I can just see Jack all wet too! Yum. Part 2 will be here soon, honestly...

thelastaerie April 14 2008, 22:50:36 UTC

OMG... the image of a wet Jack is always a good sign! :P

And what a lovely day Ennis has planned for Jack.. .awww... and we still have evening to look forward to! Ennis taking him to ride... it's like sharing a favourite part of his life with Jack :P

just a lovely lovely chapter... I can't wait for the night fall *winks*

He hoped that what he had planned would give Jack a birthday he would always remember, long after the other memories of this summer faded away.

this statement is both so beautiful and little sad... I hope not just this birthday, that they have more days to accumulate other beautiful memories... but this summer, is like Brokeback... except a bit crowdy :P

thanks for the update, Christie :)

poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 14:22:14 UTC

Hi Eve, thanks for your lovely comment, I'm glad you liked the chapter, and the horse riding, I enjoyed writing it even though I know nothing about horse riding!! :)

sweetje April 14 2008, 22:54:19 UTC

I think that, as long as Jack spends his birthday with Ennis, he doesn't care what they do, as long as they're together and alone.
The horseback ride was a sweet start to Jack's birthday. I can hardly wait to know what the surprise is that Ennis has in his rucksack for Jack.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter. I love this story! : )
Debra

poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 14:55:34 UTC

Hi Debra, thanks for your comment, and you are right, as long as Jack is with Ennis, he doesnt care what they do. But Ennis has plans......;) Thanks for reading.

Middle Of Niwhere Chapter 13 Part 1 bmshirts April 14 2008, 22:56:14 UTC

Ahhhh! Now we're cooking! It's Jack's birthday and Ennis has secret plans!!! I think the hidden present is the love spoon. I hope Jack doesn't follow Bob's advice and spend his birthday getting very, very drunk! First of all, it would spoil the evening and night Ennis has planned, Second, that's not how a leader should speak to one of his counselors. Third, a drunk Jack could inadvertantly stir up trouble for he and Ennis, especially if bitchy Cindy comes around. Can't we drown her or something? PLEASE! She doesn't really want Jack any more. She just doesn't want to be the dumpee!
Now on to Part 2?
Thanks. Carole

Re: Middle Of Niwhere Chapter 13 Part 1 poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 14:58:28 UTC

Hey Carole, thanks for your comment. Firstly, dont worry about Cindy, she wont be anywhere near where Ennis and Jack spend the night. Secondly, Jack is not going to get blind drunk, but he'll be giddy, I think he's entitled, since its his 21st. Bob was just being a mate for a minute, not a boss, because he really likes Jack and Jack was off duty at that point. As for the love spoon...well, you'll just have to read part 2! ;) Thanks for reading!