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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 13, Part 1

Apr 14, 2008 20:33

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17
Thanks: To Em and Keren for all your help, encouragement and support.
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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 13

Jack’s Birthday: Part 1Jack ( Read more... )

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bbmbeliever April 14 2008, 23:33:14 UTC

Loved it. Jack's b-day is definately living up to my expectations so far. Looking forward to Part 2 with the drinking, partying and most of all hot night together!

poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 14:58:57 UTC

Hey bbmbeliever, thanks for your comment, part 2 will be arriving shortly, as soon as I can write it!! LOL

landofthedragon April 14 2008, 23:56:44 UTC

The anticipation of whats to come will truly kill me LOL! God really hope we won't have to wait to long. At least they got to kiss, well worth the wait for sure. Ennis is such a romantic I'm loving all the little shy looks he keeps giving Jack from underneath his hat. Gush It's So Ennis, can't wait to see what he's got planned, or whats in that package???? a love spoon would be my guess????? (sorry couldn't resist).

Lovely, lovely story. hugs L

poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 15:08:40 UTC

Hi L, thanks for your comment. I had to get a kiss in this part, it was too tempting! I really hope you wont have too long to wait either, hopefully early next week. Thanks for reading.

camillar April 15 2008, 01:19:00 UTC

Yay! Another great chapter! Can't wait to see how the rest of the evening unfolds, and to see what Ennis is hiding in his bag! Thanks for the update!
Camilla

poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 15:09:48 UTC

Thanks Camilla, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Part 2 will be here soon I promise.

mariez65 April 15 2008, 01:27:53 UTC

I really like how you give us those moment when each one is privately studying the other. Beautifully done. I don't think Jack could've asked for a better birthday - and it's not over yet. I can't imagine Jack not loving anything Ennis gives to him. :) Wonderful, as always!

Thanks,
Marie

poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 15:14:49 UTC

Hi Marie, thanks for your comment, its lovely. And thanks for reading.

torry28 April 15 2008, 02:24:08 UTC

Just wonderful.I can't get enough of them being together. Riding together and Ennis commenting how Jack is a natural on a horse and feels sad for him to have missed out. Looking forward to the night, wow what is the gift Ennis has for him besides the obvious? I'm a bit worried about the package and letter Jack received and didn't bother to open. I hope it is nothing to hurt Jack .
Thank you for your visual description It makes me feel like I'm right there.
Hugs
Torry

poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 15:15:45 UTC

Hi Torry thanks for your comment. Dont worry about the package and letter Jack got, ok? There really is nothing to worry about there....Jack just wants Ennis. Part 2 will come soon I promise!