Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 13, Part 1

Apr 14, 2008 20:33

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17
Thanks: To Em and Keren for all your help, encouragement and support.
Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.

Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 13

Jack’s Birthday: Part 1Jack ( Read more... )

poppyhoney_67, au!au, bbm, middle of nowhere

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atz75 April 15 2008, 02:31:44 UTC
This was just so sweet! Great update! Can't wait for more. :-)

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poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 15:16:02 UTC
Hey atz75, thanks for your comment! Glad you liked it.

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samtyr April 15 2008, 03:13:01 UTC
This was really great. Not too surprised when Ennis took Jack riding at the ranch. I love it when they have some time to themselves, no-one around to snoop or anything. I hope that nothing (or should I say no one) spoils their plans for tonight. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing this.

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poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 20:04:13 UTC
Hey samtyr, thanks for your comment, I'm glad you liked it! I hope you enjoy what Ennis has in store for Jack, later.

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smiles_a_lot April 15 2008, 03:19:38 UTC
Yay! I just noticed the last paragraph. Hell yeah, I'm not only psy-cho...I'm psy-chic. Boo yah. Let the games begin. xx Em

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poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 20:04:54 UTC
Oh yeah, you are all of those things, and more! Thanks so much for the ideas, encouragement and support!! :)

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poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 20:05:32 UTC
Hi Kathy, thanks for your comment. Hope you like the second part of the chapter.

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bbm_lover April 15 2008, 07:44:14 UTC
Oh that was just so sweet. Ennis planning everything for Jack's birthday. Enjoyed the description of the ride as well as the scenery, and that kiss by the creek was just so touching and beautiful. Cant wait to read what else Ennis has planned for Jack. Love how they think on each other. Thanks for writing this, cant wait for Part 2.
Jess

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poppyhoney_67 April 15 2008, 20:06:21 UTC
Hi Jess, thanks for your comment. Glad you liked it, they think on each other alot, dont they? They are smitten. Hope you like part 2, when its posted.

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