Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 13, Part 1

[poppyhoney_67]

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17
Thanks: To Em and Keren for all your help, encouragement and support.
Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.

Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 13

Jack’s Birthday: Part 1Jack

Comments

[tizi17]

why worry dear? that was great, really!!!
thank you for writing, just keep on like that, it's perfect! can't wait to see where it goes...

[poppyhoney_67]

Hey Fausta, thanks for your comment. I'm a worrier by nature, cant help it. So glad you liked it though, now I've just got to write part 2!

[big_heart_june]

LOL, love Jack's t-shirt and his embarrassing skip! Omg *giggles* poor him! And I absolutely LOVED Ennis's riding gift to Jack, how lovely and thoughtful. His embarrassing flush and shy grins are just too adorable too. I was so touched by his worry that Jack might not get any post on his b'day...he is the sweetest.

I needed a little pick-me-up, Christine, I'm not feeling too hot today and this was just as beautiful as ever. You know how much I looked forward to this and how much I love your style. I CANNOT wait for tonight! *squeeeeee* Beautiful writing ♥

Love, June XXXX

[poppyhoney_67]

Hey June, aww I'm sorry to hear you are not too good today, but I'm so glad my chapter was able to cheer you up a bit. Thanks for your lovely comments, hope you like part 2 when I get round to writing it! *Hugs*

[tmn1966]

Another wonderful update. I can't tell you how much I enjoy your characterizations of Jack and Ennis and your OCs are just as rich.

I can't wait to see what else Ennis has in store for Jack!

Teri

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Teri, wow your comment was lovely, I am so flattered to hear how much you like it and the characterisations...so glad you like Meli too. I like her! Thanks so much.

[fl1789]

THAT WAS THE MOST ROMANTIC,SWEET
AND FUN BIRTHDAY THAT ANYONE COULD HAVE!!!

AND THERE IS STILL PART 2!! CAN'T WAIT!!

THANKS FOR SHARING

FL.

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Fl, thanks so much - I am trying to make it a birthday to remember - for both of them!! Part 2 will be here, soon, fingers crossed. Thanks for reading!

[rosiet]

How exactly am I supposed to form a coherent comment...when I'm drooling over this chapter....and drooling in anticipation of the next one too

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Rosie, thanks for such a wonderful comment! I'm so glad you liked it, after all my fretting over it, it finally worked out in the end...I'm so happy you enjoyed it all....I hope it won't take too long before you get to read part 2!