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Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 13, part 2

Apr 30, 2008 12:49

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17
Thanks: To Keren, Rosie and Matthew for all your help and encouragement with this chapter.
Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.
Dedication: To Em, for always being so ( Read more... )

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rightwhere_u_r April 30 2008, 12:05:48 UTC

Ha! First to leave a comment because I was just posting Liberation like 30 minutes ago... LOL! Can't wait to go and read this! Love and hugs, Mel

poppyhoney_67 April 30 2008, 12:32:58 UTC

Hey Mel *waves*

I really hope you like it.....I'm going to read Liberation when I have caught my breath....LOL

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poppyhoney_67 May 2 2008, 10:31:51 UTC

Hi Lindsey, glad you liked the first bit. You're right about Ennis...

tizi17 April 30 2008, 17:44:14 UTC

beans and beer - the essentials... LOL!!!
i thought it might be something else.. ;-))

thank you for updating - and leaving us - again - over the cliff.. you do that on purpose, right? *pout*

poppyhoney_67 May 2 2008, 10:32:26 UTC

Hi Fausta, beans and beer ARE the essentials. ;) LOL Hope you enjoyed both parts. Thanks for reading.

freetraveller15 April 30 2008, 23:28:23 UTC

(...) so they were touching and no space was left between them.
“Ennis, Ennis,” Jack breathed as he kissed Ennis’s neck, the sensation causing his body to tremble. Ennis wrapped his arms tightly around Jack and inhaled the scent of Jack.
“Seems you’re all better now,” Ennis said, kissing the top of Jack‘s ear.
“Yeah, my hands may have cooled down, but I’m burning up everywhere else. Think your healing hands can help with that?”
Ennis felt hot himself, never knowing how to respond when Jack talked that way.

OMG, Christine, this is so sensual and beautiful and right!...
Thank you so much!
Off to read the next part!
Paola xxx

poppyhoney_67 May 2 2008, 10:32:54 UTC

Hi Paola, thanks for your comment, so glad you liked it!!

shieldmaid1 May 1 2008, 00:01:07 UTC

OMG, I can't wait to see what happens now!!!! Get the tent set up, and let's go! OK, on to the next . . . brilliant so far. :) xx Jen

poppyhoney_67 May 2 2008, 10:33:18 UTC

Hey Jen, thanks for your comment - yep, tents up, lets see if they get in it!!! LOL