Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 16

Jul 16, 2008 08:56

 
Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17 for the whole story
Thanks: To Em (smilesalot) for all your help and support, and to Keren for your constant encouragement, it means so much to me. 
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aileenfan July 16 2008, 10:29:55 UTC
Oh!!! So much angst!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

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poppyhoney_67 July 17 2008, 11:36:34 UTC
Hi aileenfan, thanks for your comment, yeah I know so much angst, but hold on, there is light in the tunnel soon.

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elena_62 July 16 2008, 10:34:26 UTC
You can't handle all this angst??? Just imagine our reactions!
Have mercy and please try to update soon!

Thank you for the wonderful chapter! It was all very believable and well written.

Antonella

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poppyhoney_67 July 17 2008, 11:42:08 UTC
Hi Antonella, thanks for your comment - yeah, I can imagine what its like for you to read it since I know what's going to happen!! I'm glad you found it believable, thank you so much for that. I have started writing the next chapter, I will try hard to post it soon.

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poppyhoney_67 July 17 2008, 11:44:03 UTC
Hi Lindsey, yeah sorry about the angst level being on very high in this chapter! Jack will recover dont worry, I would never have something bad done to them. And yeah, Justin, poor kid, he's confused and lonely and clings on to Ennis like a lifeline. I'm hoping to post the next chapter as soon as I can. Thanks for reading. *hugs to you*

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poppyhoney_67 July 17 2008, 11:45:01 UTC
Hi Jen, thanks for reading my story, sorry you had to get caught up on an angsty chapter! Things will get better soon, I promise. Thanks for your comment.

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kmdlrd July 16 2008, 13:23:43 UTC
These poor boys. Obviously communication is not their strength. Both were speaking and neither one was listening. Hopefully they will work it out soon. The break up scene was so real, I was as crushed as Jack. Great writing. Now get back to it and fix it!!! (Sorry, didn't mean to be pushy). How much time is left at camp? Thanks so much for sharing. - B

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poppyhoney_67 July 17 2008, 11:46:41 UTC
Hi B, thanks for your comment. You are right about their lack of communication skills, they need to work on that. And they will. I'm glad it all worked for you, despite it being hard to read. They dont have much time left at camp, probably about 4 chapters worth, plus an epilogue that will be off camp. Thanks for reading.

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