Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 18

[poppyhoney_67]

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17 for the whole story
Thanks: To Em (smilesalot) for your great help with this chapter, and to Keren for your constant encouragement. 
Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.
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Comments

[smiles_a_lot]

Oh Wow. So cool! Do I get first comment? I DID! Which is kind of funny because I almost always get first comment anyways!! First of all, Meli is my hero and I love her to bits. Secondly, Howie has redeemed himself and is allowed to live. Thirdly, Ryan needs a spanking and not in a good way. Fourthly, I would like to volunteer to spank both Jack and Ennis but in a really really bad way that will make us all sweaty and very happy!
Loved this chapter, especially when Ennis gave Jack the spoon. Gulp. So beautiful. And of course the "I got you"'s. Huzzah! Jack and Ennis are together and all's right with the world. Loved it, C. xx Em

[poppyhoney_67]

hey em, yay you did get first comment. *claps* Thanks to you, the chapter turned out good....big relief. I don't want to think about Ryan too much for a bit, but Jack and Ennis and spanking I can think about - alot actually! lol So glad it worked for you. Thank you. x

[adahleah]

great chapter. They are finally back together!

[poppyhoney_67]

Thank you for your comment adahleah, so glad you liked it. And yay for them getting back together, I'm happy about that too. Thanks for reading. Love your icon, BTW. Beautiful.

[elena_62]

The angst alarm is over, thank God and Christine.
Aww! Very sweet chapter, at least in the second part ;-).

Only one thing: I've been suffering as well with Jack! I wouldn't forgive Ennis too quickly ;-).

Thank you for sharing!

Antonella

[poppyhoney_67]

Hey antonella, thanks for your comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I was happy to share, since there was a limited amount of angst in this one. Angst alarm is definitely over. Thanks for reading.

[thelastaerie]

Oh yes! What a satisfactory chapter! Bad guy got his punishment and good "hot" guys back together :)

I am so happy that Ennis has finally given that lovespoon to Jack... and the "L" word... awww... what do we say? what doesn't kill makes you stronger, I think Ennis came out this crisis not only a stronger person, he also sees things clearer.

Poor Jack, all he needs is an Ennis who believes in himself, as much as he believe in Jack.

The reunion sex... so sweet and tender and hot. oh my, the workshop... should be renamed as loveshop :)

Meli is a delight - woman like her has to take control of things when guys fail... lol :)

Thanks so much for the update, hon :)

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Eve, thanks for your comment, so glad you liked it. I lol'ed at renaming the workshop the loveshop...I like that ;) And Meli is cool isnt she, I just love to write that girl. Thanks for reading x

[mariez65]

“Damn,” Jack said.

I second that - Hot Damn!!! I'm feeling a little breathless myself :) Oh, and Ennis giving Jack that spoon and the words that he said along with it .... almost unbearably lovely. Swoon.

How delicously ironic that that little !@#!@#$% Ryan was actually the impetus for getting them back together. If he only knew what a favor he actually did for J&E LOL!!! I know Ennis learned some important lessons here and I think this will all end up making their relationship just that much stronger.

And I can't forget our hero, Meli! Everyone should have a friend like her. Great job - thanks!

Marie

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Marie, thanks for your comment. Yeah, how ironic that Ryan's stunt got them back together...I think he wouldn't be too happy if he knew. But he doesn't so who cares about him anyway? So glad you liked it all and the love spoon - always wanted that to be given at an extremely important moment...I felt this was it. Thanks for reading.