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poppyhoney_67

Little Bird

Jul 23, 2007 15:28

Rating: NC-17

Summary: This is a one-shot in the Universe of The Wolf and The Thunderbird, written by the wonderful .debutante9. Nothing much happens, just Ennis and Jack waking up.

Thanks: To debutante9, for being so gracious and kind in allowing me to indulge in a little romantic tomfoolery with these boys. For anyone not familiar with this ( Read more... )

au!au, little bird, bbm, the wolf and the thunderbird

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poppyhoney_67 July 23 2007, 20:54:09 UTC

Hi Lindsey

so glad you liked it. I like the idea of them waking up like this too, all sweet and tender. *sigh* I know its not what life is like all the time, but its nice for them to have some shared joy now and again. Thanks so much for your comments.

rosiet July 23 2007, 15:05:14 UTC

Awwww... I LOVED this! It is really beautiful, a wonderful, sweet, hot, look into the life this Jack and Ennis have now,...and everything I hoped for them ( ... )

poppyhoney_67 July 23 2007, 20:56:14 UTC

Hi Rosie, thought you'd like those lips!! Ennis surely does too. There's something special there, just for him. Thanks for your lovely comments, it means a lot to me that you commented and liked it.

mississaugared July 23 2007, 15:29:48 UTC

Good morning, indeed!!

Lovely, Christie. A very sweet visit with TWATTB boys.

Ennis kissed Jack softly at first, letting murmurs of "little bird" float into his mouth. He knew that would have Jack climbing the walls of his insides, and light him up like Christmas.

You lit us up like Christmas, too. :) Thank you for posting this, honey. Big hugs, E.

poppyhoney_67 July 23 2007, 20:57:25 UTC

Thanks so much Elizabeth, am glad you liked. Its nice for things to be sweet once and while, dont you think? I think these boys deserve it. Thanks again, I'm really touched that you liked it.

snowmore July 23 2007, 15:41:31 UTC

Poppyhoney - this was so sweet and erotic. A wonderful treat this morning - for me, as well as Jack and Ennis.

I must go catch up with this story. This was one of my favourites in the Brokeback Mountain fandom, as was debutante9's The Bellweather.

Great job!! I love hot mornings with beautiful men like Jack and Ennis.

poppyhoney_67 July 23 2007, 20:58:40 UTC

Hey Snowmore, lovely to see you here! And you thought it was sweet and erotic? wow, I'm glad because I did too!! lol

Oh and you must go and catch up with this story, its wonderful, truly. Thanks so much for your comments, they mean a lot.

big_heart_june July 23 2007, 16:59:40 UTC

AW, Christie! How utterly sweet is this?? I LOVED it! So much sweet hot tenderness, so much love ♥ I adored Jack thinking of Ennis as his angel and these lines were utterly lovely:

Jack was desperate to open his eyes, wanted to see Ennis's face close to his, and drink in the wonder of this boy who had believed in him and brought him home.

I really loved these lines too, you describe the love they feel for each other so well:

Ennis knew Jack liked to have some part of himself touching him while they slept. Most times, Jack would stroke Ennis's blonde curls just over his left ear, that would more often than not send them both off to sleep with little trouble, and his hand could usually still be found there when the sun rose. Ennis didn’t mind - before Jack, there'd been so few touches from anyone on his own self that had meant anything extraordinary - but now, even Jack flicking a fly off Ennis's shoulder was special.It's so lovely imagining this Jack and Ennis to feel so safe and loved and happy together. Thanks so much for that ( ... )

poppyhoney_67 July 23 2007, 21:00:31 UTC

I adore your avatar June!! You always do have the best avatars. I'm glad I surprised you, and that it was a good surprise. I'm so glad and happy that you liked it, and that you liked the bit about Jack thinking on Ennis as his angel, because that's how I see it in this story. Thanks so much for your lovely comments.