A Brief Acceptance (11/11)

[por_queeee]

            When Walter mumbles Daniel’s name, groping for him in the shadows, Daniel could cry, already is, small tears sliding over the hills of his cheeks.

“It’s OK.” He whispers through choked tears, gently cupping Walter’s face with large hands. Walter rasps his name again, wincing, fingers seeking out the make-shift bandages that

Comments

[otakulord89]

A great end for a great fic. I really liked looking forward to this fic.

[por_queeee]

Thank you :3

[hey_skip]

That was great D;

[rwyterstar]

Aww... I'm so glad he's okay. :3

It's strangely anti-climactic, for me - but then again, good fics usually feel that way to me. :) It's like, I spend so much time reading it and loving it, and then at the end I have to stop and realize, "Oh. It's done..." :) You ended it well, though, you really did. I loved this story... a whole lot. Will you be writing more?

Spectacular job! :)

[por_queeee]

Well sorry if it's my fault it seems that way! Ending this was just big pain that I worried over a lot. It's difficult to set the right mood for an ending.

Thanks so much! And yes, I'll be writing more soon hopefully. I currently have an entry I'm working on for the kink meme competition, so that's the next story you'll see from me.

[rwyterstar]

Ohh, no, not what I meant at all! :) It wasn't you that made it anticlimactic. What I meant was... well, I love to read, and when I'm reading a series, I kind of drive myself crazy, like "what's gonna happen next WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN"... and then when it's over, I'm sad, since I don't get to look forward to that anymore, you know? :) It's a good thing. I loved your fic, really, I did. <3 The ending was perfect - not too sweet, but not "WELP it's over let's all go home". Just perfect.

:D Hooray! We get more!

[kahoko007]

Oh wow. That was beautiful. I enjoyed this story all the way through. I don't even have words for how I'm feeling right now. Beautiful, beautiful job. :)

[por_queeee]

Thanks so much! I never could have finished this without you guys supporting me :]

[lady_wormtongue]

Aw, wonderful! I'm glad that Walter's okay, and I'm glad that Dan is okay with Walter, all parts of him. This was such a great story, I hope you write more for this fandom. :)