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Prompt Post Round 2

Jun 01, 2011 12:11

Rules~ Prompt Post Round 1~ Fills Round 1~ Discussion

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Power Struggle (Chell/evil!human!Wheatley) anonymous June 8 2011, 03:44:44 UTC

Seeing her former best (and maybe only) friend gone mad with power makes Chell sad and angsty, but it also pisses her off. Wheatley's pretty mad, too; he feels that Chell has betrayed him by going off the rails with GLaDOS instead of doing his tests. By the time she finally confronts him, they are both itching (ha) for a fight.

I want to see Chell and Wheatley in an all-out, fist flailing brawl that somehow becomes rough and tumble sexytimes, but with an undercurrent of affection. So not hatesex, but angry, angry lovemaking. Bonus points for including biting, if that's not too squicky <3

Re: Power Struggle (Chell/evil!human!Wheatley) anonymous June 8 2011, 06:54:13 UTC

Ooooo~! Do want. Make it so!

Re: Power Struggle (Chell/evil!human!Wheatley) anonymous June 9 2011, 16:30:24 UTC

This is my idea of perfect sex! and biting... unf.

Bear with me op, cause I am gonna write this.

Re: Power Struggle (Chell/evil!human!Wheatley) anonymous June 10 2011, 02:07:43 UTC

OP here. Yay! I can't wait~ <3

The Wheat Field (warning: contains violence! and later sexytimes) anonymous June 12 2011, 12:21:52 UTC

She grit her teeth, fists clenching and unclenching as she struggled to keep her head clear of the drowsiness that threatened to overwhelm her. Across the room, she could see Wheatley, long limbs sprawled inelegantly as he lay face down in the rubble he had created. Dead? She wasn't sure; didn't know if it was even possible to kill these strange no-longer-humans that Aperture had created. After all, she'd originally thought she'd managed to kill Gladys, and yet the strange woman with the amber eyes was nestling herself back into the cradle of wires that dominated the chamber as if she'd never been away ( ... )

Re: The Wheat Field (warning: contains violence! and later sexytimes) anonymous June 12 2011, 17:14:08 UTC

OP here!

oh, i am loving this! Gladys' little bit of revenge on Wheatley had me giggling like a maniac, and Chell's reaction to the outside was sweet and sad at the same time. And:

"Why?" His voice was desperate and bewildered. "Why are you always trying to kill me lately?"

I love this line. oh god i love this whole fill so far and i can't wait for the rest! I feel like the luckist anon in the world! all of my love, authoranon~ <3

Re: The Wheat Field (warning: contains violence! and later sexytimes) anonymous June 13 2011, 08:50:09 UTC

authoranon here: I'm so pleased to hear that, OP! I wasn't sure whether I was being violent enough (or too violent) so knowing that you're enjoying reading it as much as I'm enjoying writing it is the best incentive t continue!

The Wheat Field pt2 anonymous June 12 2011, 14:24:49 UTC

"Do you have any idea... how much... this hurts?" he asked, punctuating each phrase by giving her a little shake. "Do you know what it feels like having ten wires ripped out of your cock? Bloody murder, let me tell you ( ... )

Re: The Wheat Field pt2 anonymous June 13 2011, 02:59:15 UTC

Holy crap, this is incredible! I do hope there's more of this!

Re: The Wheat Field pt2 anonymous June 13 2011, 09:26:19 UTC

Lovelovelovelovelove. I need moooooaaaarrrrr! This is absolutely amazing so far.

The Wheat Field pt3 anonymous June 13 2011, 08:46:00 UTC

"All right, look, maybe things have started to get a bit out of hand..." He was wary now, seeming less aggressive, less agitated. Chell thought that if he were left alone a little while longer, then whatever neurological and chemical influence the control chassis had held over him would fade entirely, and she would have her Wheatley back ( ... )

Re: The Wheat Field pt3 anonymous June 13 2011, 09:20:30 UTC

i shivered in delight reading about that kiss, i am ABSOLUTELY LOVING this contrast between affection and anger LOVING IT TO BITS. i must have more!

please?

Re: The Wheat Field pt3 anonymous June 13 2011, 13:20:56 UTC

I love this so far, anon! Keep going!

Re: The Wheat Field pt3 anonymous June 13 2011, 18:44:13 UTC

OP returning to squee some more!

i especially love your characterization in this-
Wheatley is the perfect mix of angry and guilty and dejected, and his dialogue is just great. You really captured the character. I love your Chell to; she has a tender side while still being stubborn and badass.

the little emotional flashback is great. the little sparklings of romance between the two of them before Wheatley's "episode" are super cute and also kind of sad, considering..

anyway, enough rambling! love this, love YOU, can't wait for more~ <3

The Wheat Field pt4 (brawl time) anonymous June 13 2011, 14:09:28 UTC

Chell tore towards him, feeling the air rushing into her lungs, the muscles of her arm working, delightfully unencumbered by the portal device. He froze as she came towards him, a picture of confusion and alarm. In another mood, the expression would have made Chell feel sorry for him. Now, though, she just wanted to punch him right in his moronic face ( ... )

Re: The Wheat Field pt4 (brawl time) anonymous June 13 2011, 18:45:35 UTC

OP here again (getting tired of me yet? :D )

oooh getting to the good part~! the fight scene is intense and the- ah- compromising position at the end is very nice.

keep writing authoranon! you have all of my love to serve as you inspiration lol~ <3

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