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Prompt Post Round 1

Apr 27, 2011 02:38

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Chell/Wheatley, AU endgame anonymous May 10 2011, 09:38:07 UTC

Instead of leaving Wheatley to drift in space and letting Chell simply leave, GLaDOS sees a chance to punish them both by rescuing Wheatley and putting him in the body of a human who was in cryo sleep. Nothing's worse than being forced to wander around the middle of nowhere with the world's biggest idiot to torment you, right?

Bonus points if it leads to Wheatley starting to look at Chell in a new light and growing completely confused - but aroused - by these new feelings.

Re: Until the End - 9 (end) anonymous May 27 2011, 15:01:34 UTC

God damn. So beautiful and bittersweet. What a poignant little story. Thank you so much, authoranon.

Re: Until the End - 9 (end) anonymous May 27 2011, 17:14:48 UTC

Oh, I loved this! You are amazing. ♥

Re: Until the End - 9 (end) anonymous May 28 2011, 02:59:52 UTC

I love it~ this was simply amazing to read

Re: Until the End - 9 (end) anonymous May 29 2011, 13:42:30 UTC

Just...
wow.

No words, anon. No words.

Until the End - 10 normandplume May 31 2011, 23:05:02 UTC

This is authornon with another bit of story from this setting, just a bit of fluff that I couldn't help writing after seeing Outside Aperture. Again, thank you all so much for reading UTE and leaving so many amazing comments! You can find it and all the other fills I've done at this journal (which I created more or less to store fills for this community :D).

SheShe smells terrible on hot days and her clothes are frayed and filthy. She jumps at certain small noises, throwing her hands up as if she still had a gun to shoot an escape route with. If he comes up behind her without warning she lashes out (but she's always sorry after). Sometimes at night he wakes up to see her wide-eyed and shaking, seeing cold walls instead of the place they are sleeping in. She loves anything that looks like cake or tastes like it but the word itself makes her skin crawl ( ... )

Re: Until the End - 9 (end) anonymous June 10 2011, 10:16:40 UTC

You should publish this
without mentioning that it's a videogame fanfic.
It stands alone as a story.

Along the Road - 1 normandplume June 1 2011, 20:35:32 UTC

It only just now dawned on this writernon that the sort-of-not-quite sequel/continuation of "Until the End" is probably getting lost down there. If you're so inclined, this is also being updated on FF.net and at the journal I'm posting with, but I'll always put the new stuff here first.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7039432/1/Along_the_Road

Also, actual kink is in the works for this one, too. :D

Along the Road

SheShe smells terrible on hot days and her clothes are frayed and filthy. She jumps at certain small noises, throwing her hands up as if she still had a gun to shoot an escape route with. If he comes up behind her without warning she lashes out (but she's always sorry after). Sometimes at night he wakes up to see her wide-eyed and shaking, seeing cold walls instead of the place they are sleeping in. She loves anything that looks like cake or tastes like it but the word itself makes her skin crawl ( ... )

Re: Along the Road - 1 anonymous June 1 2011, 22:14:02 UTC

I LOVE that Wheatley still has some mental scarring. It's very realistic, and further cements his humanity. And it makes him a total woobie. <3

Re: Along the Road - 1 anonymous June 1 2011, 22:44:03 UTC

Put a comment on the other prompt post--or should I put them here? Anyway, this continues being really sweet and beautiful.

Re: Along the Road - 1 normandplume June 2 2011, 07:12:11 UTC

I saw your comment and I shall reply to it here.

1. Ohgod someone else watched this show! XD

2. The song is so sad/sweet. I was gonna write smut but I don't think I can now. Thank you!

3. Wilfred Brimley has your insulin.
http://media.onsugar.com/files/ons1/349/3490763/30_2009/da/diabeetus.jpg

Along the Road - 2 normandplume June 2 2011, 08:15:59 UTC

Damn it, anon, this is your fault! I was going to write smut but you guys get some really sappy fluff instead. More smut is forthcoming, I swear! While you wait, just remember that white shirts in the rain are a blessing from on high. :D

Be MoreRain is drumming on the old house roof. Every drop makes him cringe. He focuses on the shape of her leaning in the open doorway, silhouetted against gray and green. The day is still warm and he feels hot and sticky in his clothes. Suddenly she stands up straight, flashes him a grin, and dashes out into the downpour ( ... )

Re: Along the Road - 2 anonymous June 3 2011, 21:17:06 UTC

this is so sweet!

Re: Along the Road - 2 anonymous June 4 2011, 05:31:40 UTC

hrrrrrnnggggggggg yeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssss

this is super excellent~ i love iit so much

Re: Along the Road - 2 rubitinmyeyes June 8 2011, 05:15:54 UTC

Oh you did update here! I'd managed to overlook this. Like I said on ff.net, beautiful work and I'm glad you liked the song!

Along the Road - 3 normandplume June 16 2011, 15:31:16 UTC

I haven't forgotten about this fic or you lovely readers. In fact, I come bearing sexy times! :D As always, thank you guys for the comments and for your patience. :)

Fire and WaterRain is one thing, a river is entirely another ( ... )

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